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29-2 Chronoframe (I)

🕑 Added 2024-09-10 17:34:48 +0000 UTC

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Tobi131313 .

"boomed in the back of Veylis’ skull and the Regular winced" probably should be Draus there.

Deathly_God

That ending brought a tear to my eye... Also, "Chambers latched onto the nipple of hope." Never change Chambers. Stay Hard, Stay True.

Chris Fox

"Need you to snuff to Chronoframes" "to" should probably be "the"

Chris Fox

"first, but Drows ready, Draus could see" This sentence seems wrong.

Dar-Angol

Reminds me of some ff mixed up w eldritch shit if I could picture it in my head,your writin some badass shit consang keep it up!!


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