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35-1 A Deception of Time

🕑 Added 2025-04-10 11:41:03 +0000 UTC

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Deathly_God

Ooo that would be a cool twist. That would have been a huge manipulative twist on everything!

Deathly_God

I kinda agree with this sentiment. I'm willing to watch and see where all of this goes. That being said, I don't really understand how these alternate versions of themselves are so enchained to her will. Like I get path manipulations, or holding alternate forms of themselves hostage for so long that they bend and break... But for Avo and Draus especially, it really just doesn't make sense why they have such brainwashed versions of themselves. At least if you can't reach into the past. It would make sense if she could abduct the Avo of chapter 1, book 1, and raise him through the paths herself... Or Draus before the Greatling fiasco. But the current forms of them seem more likely to either null or ceaselessly taunt Veylis before they'd ever bend or break.

Adam

I really love this story. Usually the more esoteric and divergent stories authors attempt to write in RR format don't make it past 30 chapters when the initial inspiration runs out and the dauting task of continuing an original story becomes too heavy of a reality. The world building for this story is a complicated web to keep up with and while by no means 100% it almost always suspends the disbelief within its own rules precedent. This all being said I am uncomfortable with Veylis's pathborn, I don't understands how they are just continually created and so specifically. I thought that this was the edge given by the stillborn to Avo but Veylis just seems to bypass the need and just does it. Usually it is the MC who authors overburden with plot armor but it seems to be applied in reverse for Veylis. After so many chapters just had to vent this little bit.

Star i

Somehow I feel like the ashbringer is not as “on his side” as the Infacer thinks


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