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II-42 Battlebonds (II)

🕑 Added 2024-12-26 15:47:51 +0000 UTC

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LtDan

I mean your writing has definitely gotten cleaner over time. I was mostly amused that I was able to figure out what it was from.

Brent Stinebaker

Yeah. I usually use it for editing; it is partially how I've been trying to clean this up. This part is mainly for dictation.

Jeremy Russell

I think it’s either missing or when Wei first saw the Bastard in person the sirens song made him forget or something.

Brady Fiola

Oh I thought that was an editor’s note

BoadBoad

What did he see before? Did we not see it?

luxrus

The EGI has stopped hiding

LtDan

"Here’s a polished and formatted version of the excerpt, tailored to feel like part of a novel:" looks like you missed a bit of AI framing when you plugged it in for a cleanup pass.


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