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OTB CH2 pg 9 & 10!

🕑 Added 2019-04-22 04:16:47 +0000 UTC
OTB CH2 pg 9 & 10!
OTB CH2 pg 9 & 10!
OTB CH2 pg 9 & 10!

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I didn't really notice the background until you mentioned it OoO

WhitePhox

We all hate doing bgs though you always manage to do them well, keep up the good work, also bgs are least needed in porn lol

NS120C

And you shouldn't fret about the backgrounds, I certainly don't mind if they're simpler.

NS120C

Super cute

TJ

Is it my imagination or is Berry giving Adrian like, serious bedroom eyes in both pages?

Milo turns me on sooooooooooooooooo much!

It's here!!

Eij

wish good boy adrian would win more polls tho he is easily my fav

Caeruleum

Absolutely LOVE this comic! I do have a minor critique, but not with the comic itself, That's basically perfect. It's about how you name the files. When naming single-digit pages, maybe name them like xOTBCH2_pg09 instead of pg9 so they stay in page order with the double-digits when organized alphabetically. Just a thought, and that's really the only problem I have with any of your work.

Shadewing

they are just too cute together mmmf <3

Ramona Wanders

Milo looking good! Adrian being cute (shirtless, rawr OwO) Wonderful comic Toki. :D

Eij

MILO IS SOOO CUTEEEE

Dylan S.

Looks great ^_^

Gaby

Love this update tyyy

CHEEZMA

God these are so good! I’m loving where this is going! And by the way, Toki, you don’t have to worry about drawing backgrounds that much. I was watching a documentary on a professional manga artist and her thoughts on backgrounds. She said backgrounds are not necessary in most cases. All you need to do is to draw a background for maybe one or two panels and the audience can just imagine the setting very easily. Hope this helps! 😉

Oh, I like the new character Berry. It would very cool if he was too sneak in on some of the action :3

Diego P

If he's playing hard to convince, take off shirt, works 100% of the time


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