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II-13 Affliction

🕑 Added 2025-06-15 16:31:55 +0000 UTC

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Ved

Love the new plot line . Lone OP MC stories get repetitive after a while, especially the reincarnating ones for obvious reasons. I hope we see more of other people’s progression aside from shiv. Adam, Uva…

Tyler Thompson

Yeah Im done here. This plot has gone stupid. The whole orc thing is so stupid and convoluted to nerf the mc.

EsZeus

But the story is still good^^ dont get me wrong. I am just slightly triggered by these kind of forced things happening in stories I start to like :)

EsZeus

Ok, so basically 2 MCs. And you had to force Adam to keep pace with the First MC, because otherwise he would lack behind. You have one MC who cant die. His progress makes sense. But then you force this on a "normal" person, which lowers whatever the first MC Shiv did. So everything Shiv is doing now is worth less, because everyone can reach it "easily" like Adam does. Isn't this weird in itself? You rob the uniqueness of the MC with that. Yes he can still die. But he is not unique enough anymore, if the forced second MC us just keeping up with him DYING :) Bad idea, in my eyes. I am slightly disappointed currently. But let's see how it continues


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