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II-28 Unbroken

🕑 Added 2025-06-24 08:59:07 +0000 UTC

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Justin

NGL after the one-two punch of Adam's heroic skill and Uva using the Jealousy to PL, I was having a little discomfort with how easy and undeserving things could be getting for those in our MC's orbit. Can Hu changes things. Repairs them, even...

Codered999

Maybe if Shiv enchanted him with a level of Revenant, but he'd also need to unenchant him after Can Hu was mended so necromancy doesn't blow Can Hu up.

Rayse

It'd be cool if bonding with Shiv provided him with aspects of deathlessness and allowed him to heal.

David Smiley

Would honestly love a short book about can hu.

Kronos

Tftc! “Adamantine Adaption that would make modifying your body very difficult.” that would -> will? “Afterward, I could be worn without much difficult and provide active support in combat.” Difficult -> difficulty “I’m trying to better.” do better? be better?

Reodude

Best character so far. Honestly better than the MC and I like him quite a bit. Well done, excellent

Brent Stinebaker

They must be paracausally wed to me, because I don't know of their existence

Quyan640

For a moment I thought your wife wrote this chapter

nrcs1995

You guys did a very nice job of blending your voices!!

Dar-Angol

Great chapter,my compliments!

Leos Void

This poor guy... I hope we get to see some exploration of Can Hu's life as a crafter, creater, and caretaker. While it may be a fundamental part of who he is, and I'm glad he's coming along for the ride, it is pretty heartbreaking to see him putting all of his worth, his potential value, on returning to combat, as if what he's made here isn't worthwhile enough.


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