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Bun Sandwich WIP 2

🕑 Added 2021-06-10 02:29:53 +0000 UTC

Comments

Fen

Just such a lovely piece, the palette feels so compfy, rainy days are best! ;D For suggestions, going with Jeeves idea of them going for a while: Some scratch marks on the bed and cum stains on buns and background alike! Maybe giving that kiss some extra sloppyness...

Jeeves

Gorgeous! :3 For details, you could drop a few loose items of clothing onto the floor in the background to suggest the eagerness with which they got started. Or perhaps a phone on the nightstand with "X large number of unread notifications" to suggest they've been going a while. Looks utterly wonderful as it is though. :3

NB_medic

one of my top 3 fav you have done

SKN

Your talent with these characters is stunning, they look fantastic, and your not even done yet. I think what really does it for me, is you make them look exactly like they do in the movie, no 'humanizing' or fooling with their proportions.

KinotheFox

Looks really good and hot. Love seeing the thicc bnuuy getting love

Angel Eyes

Mmmph; :p

Stu Fox

Nick is just a tiiiiny bit monotone and he needs a bit brighter color to "pop" against the mostly grey background and fur coloring of Judy and the white bun. I'm not talking Lisa Frank or anything, but the current tonal range flattens the image as a whole. Brightening Nick would draw the eye to him at start for western viewers and then the angle of his head would direct the eye to the action. Maybe lighten his chest ruff to enhance the contrast between the the fur colors to imply a brighter russet tone.