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68: The Son of Ice and Fire, Under the Shadow of a Dragon pt.2

🕑 Added 2024-09-18 16:39:40 +0000 UTC
68: The Son of Ice and Fire, Under the Shadow of a Dragon pt.2

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Arcturus

It's up to you, you're author and know what better for your plot. Sorry for my first reaction, it was a little too much 😅

Illusiveone

Well..There were two drafts of this chapter: one with a convoluted, movie-like plot, and another where Maekar threatens her in the tavern itself. I'll post the other one with chapter 69 if you want...

Arcturus

I mean, of course it's cool and like in movie so one. But he didn't know how they would react and risked to be slain without any chance to defend himself 🙄🤷‍♂️

NobleBoy24 .

i rather enjoyed the impression he left with her, leaves a lasting image in her mind that Maekar is always in control.

Arcturus

Is he idiot or what? Why he act like arrogant prick and not just catched her with dragon, when he saw her location? She could slashed his troat and be done with it. Unnecessary and stupid risk from guy who thinks himself invisible or immortal 🙄 😒 Really sometimes risk is necessary like with Euron or when he saved princesses, but this time it's just pricky show from guy who thinks that he can't take accidental arrow in eye like Daemon Blackfyre or Aemon Targaryen. Hope he would be smarter next time


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