EmmaCruzader
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Still Defiant Error!
🕑 Added 2024-06-30 15:50:38 +0000 UTCStill Defiant Error!
Hey guys.
While reviewing the chapters in English, I noticed a translation error in one of the disadvantages, which I will correct soon. When I translated Chapter 1, I was still a novice and overlooked it, for which I apologize.
The error is in the disadvantage 'Challengers':
'individuals and entities will arise in response to your existence.'
should be
'individuals and entities will come your way in response to your existence.'
I want to clarify this disadvantage to avoid misunderstandings.
What the disadvantage means is that strong characters will appear in Daniel's path, or another way to put it is that he will be placed in the path of strong individuals.
These strong individuals will see him as someone to 'challenge' or as a 'challenge,' but this doesn't mean they will fight him or become his enemies out of nowhere. The 'bringing danger' part is because strong individuals always bring their own problems with them, problems that Daniel may or may not become involved in
And whether Daniel is able to be on good terms with these individuals depends on him.
In summary, it only makes it more likely that Daniel will encounter powerful individuals or interact with them, which may or may not pose a significant risk to his life.
It's a small spoiler, but Carol is an example. (Carol actually results from two disadvantage acting at the same time, who would have thought...)
Of course, the way it's written in the story makes it seem like Daniel has to confront all of them, which is intentional because it's a disadvantage. Daniel wasn't and won't be given an explanation like this because that would be an advantage.
Daniel makes assumptions based on what he knows; he can be wrong like everyone else when acting with limited information.
I hope this clarifies the issue completely, and once again, I sincerely apologize to my readers for overlooking this error for so long.
I still need to review all the other chapters to see if I made any other mistakes. I hope to correct them over time to make rereading this story a more enjoyable experience.
Anyway, I'm posting this here because I'll also include it in the notes for Chapter 24, which will be publicly released in a few minutes, and I don't want anyone to miss this explanation because of it. I could have put this explanation in Chapter 25, but I think it's better to make a direct post to clarify.
With that said, I bid farewell. There will probably be one or two new chapters today, one for 'Still Defiant' and maybe another one—I'll leave it as a surprise if I manage to finish it on time. Thank you for your understanding.
Comments
EmmaCruzader
Hello, sorry for taking so long to respond. The power just went out for a few moments. I only have three main stories, which are SS, SD, and AI. (And my original story, but that has been in the works for a while now. I'm just editing and rewriting some things, but for the most part, it's already advanced.) In July, a fixed update schedule for Patreon will begin, where I aim to release a chapter daily or almost daily of my different series, with SD and SS being the ones that should have the most chapters. Public updates will not differ much, being one or two chapters per week to give me time to accumulate chapters on Patreon. Of course, there will also be exclusive votes on decisions within the plot, such as Carol's Kryptonian name. You can vote if you haven't done so already. There will also be votes for the next illustrations and of course, the illustrations, which are all made by me. I don't use AI. (I have also started considering commissioning one or two more advanced artists to have more variety) In summary, I'm trying to improve the rewards, but as I mentioned in one of the notes in Still Defiant, all my stories are free, so sooner or later, you will be able to keep reading them on the site of your choice. If you want to support me on Patreon, I appreciate it very much. I also understand those who cannot, so feel free to choose what you think is best. ;D I hope this isn't too much text.
Ugly Bastard Tag
Hi i mainly came here to read still defiant but also checked out almost invincible and super soldier and and out of those I like SD and SS more but also noticed you are starting 2 other stories, isn't handling 5-6 stories a bit much? If SD and SS are only getting a chapter a week then honestly don't think I am gonna stay here much longer and stay on scribblehub instead
Connor G
Looking forward to next chapter, glad your improving translations and still keeping an eye out for errors.
