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Still Defiant! SI [Marvel/DC] 33: Date

🕑 Added 2024-08-01 03:07:59 +0000 UTC

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Josh Snider

If Daniel's worried about people noticing her, then he should go as Defiant and they should go somewhere far away from Smallville. Who would be surprised to see Defiant show up to a Five Star Restaurant in London with a supermodel?

Asura

Thanks for the chapter👋 I’m glad Mc is not completely brushing her off, like someone once said it’s better to think about his relationship long term with someone who can handle his strength and live as long as he can.

EmmaCruzader

You should post something sometime, it helps a lot to improve and notice things that you didn't notice before.

KickAsterisk

I figured she was going to be 18 soon, thank you for clarifying though. And I assumed as much, while I don’t post the fanfics I write, I still write and the idea of having to rewrite a whole chapter sounds daunting. I hope you don’t feel any pressure on the rewriting process, take as long as you need.

EmmaCruzader

I did some mental calculations and she's probably 1 or 2 months away from 18, so technically... well as long as nothing too serious happens everything should be fine. yes, having to rewrite everything will be a pain hahaha, mostly because I liked how it turned out and I don't know if I can do it again as well.

KickAsterisk

Damn, well hopefully since you wrote it out once before it should be quicker getting it put back together. Granted I know it’s still gonna take time just to get it polished to a standard you’re comfortable with posting. Thank you for the chapter, after his internal monologue with ‘FBI open up’ I wasn’t expecting anything to happen until she was legal. I think you handled this well and I’m curious to see what all Carol tells Chloe. I doubt anything too much but if I was to hazard a guess they’ll be some breadcrumbs for her to clue some things together.


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