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Yakshi vs. Steph - Part 1

🕑 Added 2022-02-17 20:06:05 +0000 UTC

Comments

Dizzie

I really like how smoothly this format transitions between characters/dialogues. It looks like it's saving a lot on background designs and focusing on characters in portions with lots of dialogue. I think it's a good first go! My only criticism is that there are some stretches of "empty" space between panels. I think the speech bubbles could be placed closer to each other to help reduce that space.

Hairless Chris

Woooo here we go! 😃 👣 We're going to have some fun now!

looks awesome, way to leave me hangin

hellenberg

lmao. now this is shaping up.

skeetbobble

Looks awesome so far. Perfect intro and nice cliffhanger! Nice shot of the feet up close.

RichardITA

Looks good man, keep it up!

Briel7

Did you have any problems opening and reading the file?

Briel7

Aye aye capitan!

DustyShelves

I'll immediately admit I'm biased against 3d and 2d getting mixed. However I will admit you did a great job with it. As for the webcomic style, I'll withhold judging to harshly until the rest of this set is out. But I will give my concerns, there's a ton of just blank unused space on the page, the lack of scenery is very apparent. After you soak in the initial character expression that's pretty much all there is to see. All the intricate details make the comics worth examining over again with our eyes is just non existent. Looking forward to part two.