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Small Changes
🕑 Added 2025-12-30 20:30:03 +0000 UTCHi everyone!
Over the past few days, I’ve been making a few changes to some pages of Saki’s Unusual Life – Chapter One
What changes did I make?
On some pages, I redrew a few of Saki’s expressions (NOT VERY NOTICEABLE).
On some pages, there were narrator dialogues explaining things that, in my opinion, didn’t really need an explanation, so I removed them (NOT VERY NOTICEABLE).
On the first pages, I redrew the speech bubbles and updated them to the font I currently use (NOTICEABLE).
On some pages, I changed Saki’s and Ayumi’s dialogues to make them more consistent with what I have planned for the future (VERY NOTICEABLE).
I changed Saki’s character description on page 65 to better match her character (VERY NOTICEABLE).
I changed the comic’s synopsis on the cover (VERY NOTICEABLE).
Which pages include these changes?
Pages 2–21
Page 21
Page 26
Page 51
Pages 59–61
Page 63
Page 65
Cover
Why did I make these changes?
As I’ve mentioned before, when I first started drawing the comic, I didn’t have a very clear idea of what I wanted to do with my characters in the future. Because of that, some dialogues in the previous version interfered with the direction I want to take the story. That’s all.
The story itself hasn’t changed much with the new dialogues. I simply wanted the comic to feel more coherent going into the next chapter. I know that rewriting parts of a comic can sometimes be counterproductive, but in this case, I feel these changes were necessary, and I hope they make sense in the long run.
And well, if you’d like to take a look at these changes, or if you want to read the comic in a more comfortable way (even if it’s not the best one), I’ve just added Chapter One of Saki’s Unusual Life to a collection here on the platform. ^^
