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The Monstrous Shall Inherit the Earth. Part 2

🕑 Added 2018-05-11 21:24:12 +0000 UTC

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Meanybeany Productions

I thought it would add an interesting dimension to their relationship. Especially with the epilogue that I just added. Also, I wanted to write the final growth and destruction scene from the perspective of someone running for their life. And, finally, the guy wouldn't be ok with what the dragon was going to do, so a breakup was inevitable, short of seriously rewriting him. How would you rather have seen the story end?

furonymous

Enjoyable story, but one thing I might want to rework was the "breakup" at the end of chapter 4. It kind of puts a damper on things imo.


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