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HTTYD - Day 23, Part 5

🕑 Added 2021-06-09 04:31:25 +0000 UTC

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jessajess99

and as far as being more taken advantage of, thats pretty much why I have the spin-off story ideas. they go a lot farther than the main story does so people can have some fun with that

jessajess99

OH ok yeah I see what u mean. yes well I like having Marcus have some strength and power to him still, thats what makes scenes interesting for me is the fact that u dont really know what will happen. at smaller sizes there's a lot less suspense since u can pretty much guess what will happen. thats why I like bigger sizes in general. but it'll still be fun to try out writing smaller sizes! and also as far as being more taken

Hoppa Heisann

What I mean is that when he is put in the most embarassing situations he escapes too easily and too fast. But I love the story! He doesn´t need to get any smaller, just more taken advantage of:). Have been waiting eagerly for the next installments.

Ry

I think he means like he's still big enough to escape situations so they end faster. Like when he's smaller, pushing Veronica away won't be possible.

jessajess99

the chapters are literally thousands of words long 😭 but im glad u still liked it

Hoppa Heisann

Can´t wait for version 2. Hope it lengthens each scene - like he will be suspended from her toe for a longer period. Right now each of the scenes are cut just too early;)


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