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Daring Do comic cover sketch
🕑 Added 2017-06-26 02:57:33 +0000 UTC I've been working on this story this week and got something solid to start withBUT the title always turns out to be the hardest part, something related to escaping or being captured would work, like "Daring Do and the escape from...", "and the Perpetual Escape" or "and the Ceaseless Capture", but I'm not really sure. what do you think?
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Polandball
meaby she thought that its some gold in liquid form, and then discovering tribal truth that gold is in fact stallions virility
Shino
that's very helpful, perpetual escape sounds the most fitting for what the story is gonna be like ive never heard of the word unrelenting before but that could work too
Tester
I am guessing from the titles, "Perpetual Escape" and "Ceaseless Capture" the she will be captured for a good while, which both excited and worries me XD. "Perpetual Escape" makes me think she will either, escape only to be captured over and over again, or be constantly "escaping'/struggling. While "Ceaseless Capture" makes me think that she will be unable to escape for a long time. Going with this theme "Unrelenting Trap" or "Unrelenting Escape/Capture" could be good ideas to consider. Another idea, that does not go with the others as much, would be "Unpleasant Surprise/Treasure". Hope this at least gets the ball rolling, feedback is welcome and would help create more ideas ^^. (Sorry if I posted two comments, my first one seems to have vanished for me and I can't seem to find it anywhere)
Shino
i like that, but it kinda suggests that she's looking for that treasure when it's more like she didn't expect to get filled with it
Shino
haha, that should help making things clear for those who wonder what it will be about
Shino
thanku, the unforseen slip or something similar sounds nice
Polandball
Hmmm how about "and liquid treasure"?
Eskalion
Daring Do and the overwhelming amount of horsecocks and tentacles
Neoncel
The capture title sounds pretty fun :3
Thrashie
".. Perpetual Escape" sounds best in my opinion. Or maybe "... the Unforeseen Slip"? or something? xp Page looks awesome btw <3
Shino
if i ever do a sequel with crystal ponies in it, thats how it will be called
Penny
Daring do and the Crystal Dong. C:
Jack Smith
the mystery of the forbidden cave
Buttocher
I like the Ceaseless Capture one. Might go best with the way the story goes.
