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Happy Halloween!!! - October 2022 - Monthly Renders

🕑 Added 2022-10-28 14:42:50 +0000 UTC
Happy Halloween!!! - October 2022 - Monthly Renders

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jay

Ty. I really appreciate it. I'll do my best.

jay

Ty that is the plan. I am getting better at my animations. They are all custom done. I don't usually use the generic sex scenes.

As someone whos played through this game and other games that are similar to it, this one is my 2nd favorite next to Corrupted Kingdoms. Your storyline however is more unique and I believe it has lots of potential. The entire concept of the "Scarlet Law" is very intruiging and in my opinion a great concept for a kinky game. That being said, this is a kinky game, therefore, the lewd scenes should have a fair amount of buildup that makes you feel like you earned it, which so far, you have done a decent job at. However, the lewd scenes themselves in my opinion are the main thing you should focus on in terms of quality. So far, and this is just constructive criticism, not insults, they are somewhat janky and could use more refining. Over time, you will get better at creating the animations, so I highly recommend you strive to make these animations the most well done and refined parts of the game. Take your time on them, yknow? Try doing some research on how scenes are created so you can better learn how to make them smoother and more refined. Look into the creator YuukiS, he makes great scene animations, and I bet he would be willing to give tips and help with your own. I have high hopes for this game, so try to use this as constructive criticism for ways to improve it. The most important thing I think you should do, is take your time, especially on crafting future animations because this will contribute to a more rewarding experience that will make players more excited to continue playing. If you have any other questions feel free to dm me :).

SadisticSaint

If i may have a Word - your Game is not exactly my special Interest in cause of that Manga Style, but i still like it tough. I like the Idea of the Game and also the Good Guy "Mode" your MC has. Unlike other Games with Slaves - you make/go your own Way. Keep going it. The Way youré doin fits the Story of your game so please keep it. And do it in the Pace you feel comfortable. You Rock!


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