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Which character do you like the most at this moment?
🕑 Added 2025-06-26 09:56:18 +0000 UTCFirst, we’ll run a poll among our subscribers—your voices will count double! Then we’ll hold a general poll for everyone.
So if you want your favorite character to get ahead, now’s the time to make some noise!
I deleted the previous poll because I forgot to enable the “Allow multiple choices” option. Sorry.
Comments
Jill Nadin
Justin doesn't appear to be packing much downstairs in the phone scene with Shelley. Please give him a few more inches so Emma can feel a real difference compared to Tyler lol
Novel
Thank you for your thoughtful feedback! I’m glad you appreciate Emma’s complexity and the slow build of the story. I hope you’ll enjoy seeing how her journey unfolds with the other characters!
Andy
Emma is an excellent character, she is determined to be the devoted loving wife but under the pressures of new jobs and a new life in a new city she is feeling the pressure and a little bit of neglect as Tyler tries to forge a new career for himself . The temptations that seem to be on offer to her are possibly awakening memories of a past life enjoyed before settling down with Tyler and her neighbours openness and promiscuity are only enhancing that . I feel her mind is very complex and the intricacies of her needs interwoven with these events are putting her at risk . I like the slow build and I’m looking forward to see how the stronger male characters , such as Mr Stevens and the photographer play on Emma’s vulnerability
