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B2 Chapter 156: Deadacre pt. 1

🕑 Added 2024-12-30 20:30:02 +0000 UTC

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Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

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I'm occasionally having trouble telling when Porkchop is speaking telepathically or aloud. Any chance you'd want to use italics for beast-speech and quotations for verbal speech or something to help tell them apart?

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Edit suggestion: sight of some duel -> site of some duel attacked the Hiwiann, how -> attacked the Hiwiann; how How do so many -> How can so many

lenkite

Well, I really don't like the cover story to be honest. He should just stick very close to the truth in such cases as lies during such a heightened period of tension are very susceptible to being broken. A neighboring village would have been better instead of a far-away settlement. Example: If Gloomhollow has already fallen and messengers were already sent out - then his story is invalid and he could be arrested and questioned as a spy.

JJ

TFTC! the sight of some duel -> the site of some duel

seth dauer

Well written balance between acknowledging the suffering without delving into a circle of guilt for things beyond his control of knowledge!

Tim Judge

Nice

James Skinner

Thanks for the chapter!


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