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B2 Chapter 157: Deadacre pt. 2

🕑 Added 2024-12-31 20:30:02 +0000 UTC

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Moon Winchester

Figure out the runework for a truth stone and see if you can make a glyph for it. That would be pretty cool.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

A B

Edit suggestion: roll of a Body -> role of a Body

DeadicatedReader

Small typo: the sergeant -> The sergeant. tftc

BelligerentGnu

One thing I always appreciate in a fantasy story are low-level (figuratively or literally) guards who do their job well. It makes the world feel more real, that people aren't just waiting around for the MC to save them.

Jamarr

Sarge was tough but fair. I don't believe the mask will hold up to any of the higher ups at the guild but hopefully they'll be out taking on quests and it won't be an issue.

lenkite

Hopefully there are signs to the guild. Walking around with Porkchop will be difficult - lot of screams like: aaah my FOOT is crushed!

Tim Judge

Nice work with the sarge. Can imagine a backstory involving the sergeants combat history . Sounds like he's been around the block.

TETRATOLULENE

Good Sarge. Clear, concise and overworked.


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