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B2 Chapter 163: Deadacre pt. 8

🕑 Added 2025-01-06 20:30:04 +0000 UTC

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Reid Thompson

150 depths gold? How much money did he get during his year in the depths? Also how much depths silver to depths gold?

Reid Thompson

He lost the multi-mastery pf warforged when it evolved, so he no longer has throwing mastery. He wouldn't be much better than a typical athlete or someone with good hand eye coordination throwing one of them.

E

I guess they were just an excuse to get the mc some money but it seems weird that he doesn’t think the blink knives would be useful to have as an unlimited ranged weapon he can just throw with his hands mix into the sword play

Moon Winchester

I hope they can find an elf to give the letters containing the information about the bond skills so they can send it to the dens. Since I feel like it’s gonna be a hot minute before they interact with any of the dens.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Thomas V.

Sure, they can handle things on their own for now. They could also handle those same things with far more ease as part of a more rounded team, as well as take on missions they *wouldn't* be able to handle on their own. It's pretty self evident. It's also not even *close* to the main argument in favour of a team though: Kaius' ¨*explicit goal* is gaining allies and building up a power base through them. The longer they wait with finding people they can trust, the more difficult it will get, for the same reason making actual, proper friends in real life becomes progressively more difficult if you get rich and/or famous. Kaius and Porkchop need people they can trust with their lives and secrets, and they need them as soon as possible. People like Kaius' friends in Three Fields, for example. This has been discussed several times, and is one of the main things Ekam the Pale told them. It was *never* gonna be just Kaius and Porkchop, for any significant length of time. So if you want things to happen in this story? If you want our beloved battle maniacs to get *literally anywhere at all*? They need proper support, and people to take care of stuff so they can go and grow stronger. Or would you prefer books upon books of them micromanaging every little thing because they don't have anyone they can trust? Seriously, there's a reason "lone wolves" aren't a thing in real life. Wolves are pack animals. Lone wolves *die*. I'd think this was pretty self evident.

Daniel Lee

I'm 6'4" tall and my normal stride is about 1.5 feet. Which would make kaius 9 foot tall. I just feel like the length of a person's stride is determined by how long you legs are so it's needlessly confusing as a measurement. I think probably the author intends for a stride to be a foot and a long stride to be a yard/meter.

Ashyles

I second this, i searched how long a stride is on google and I got 1,5 meters, but that doesn't match with Kaius being 6 and a half strides tall

Daniel Lee

Could you give some IRL examples of how far a stride vs a long stride is? I was assuming a stride was a meter but now I think maybe a long stride is a meter. It's somewhat confusing.

DeadicatedReader

Write what feels comfortable to explain the setting at the depth you want to delve into, we'll be happy reading it. Also, "The mission board had been separated into horizontal segments, each rimmed with a different material, creating a section of space perhaps two long-strides wide, by one and a half tall. Wood, then copper, bronze, iron, and steel." From your later description about wood being far left and bronze being to the right of copper, I think you meant vertical segments. May just be my interpretation though but horizontal sounds like Steel --------------------------------------------- Iron ----------------------------------------------- Bronze ------------------------------------------ Copper ----------------------------------------- Wood ------------------------------------------- While vertical would be Wood | Copper | Bronze | Iron | Steel | ------- | --------- | --------- | ----- | ------- | ------- | --------- | --------- | ----- | ------- | ------- | --------- | --------- | ----- | ------- | ------- | --------- | --------- | ----- | ------- | ------- | --------- | --------- | ----- | ------- |

BubblyGhost

Still, what I mean is the most one could do is a slap on the wrist where if the person in question kept proving themselves to be competent above their rank I feel like that should be proof enough of being stifled. Maybe I'm also a tad jaded in the belief that the Guild is less of a profit organization than one would think

gray matter

Yes and no. There’s bound to be some sort of punishment as well for doing it after you’ve joined the guild. If he did it as a freelancer and somehow found the job not on the guilds board and did then yes he could build up a reputation. However, from the larger guilds perspective, even if he could do it and accomplished it. It would set up a bad precedent for green youths with an ego and zero fear to try to accomplish the same if his reputation grew. Then a lot of current idiots that could grow into valuable members would die off early. It’s a long term balance. Now I’m sure there might be more leeway at the higher ranks where every member is expected to truly know their strengths and weaknesses. If a steel goes off and accomplishes a mission that considered too challenging then “maybe it was a good matchup” It’s probably part of the reason Ro is watching him so hard and convincing him to get a third for the other missions. She’s not only seen scions die before when going after missions that were harder, she probably is responsible for punishing him if he does even if he succeeds

BubblyGhost

I've never understood stories where jobs are locked, like sure they do that so people don't get themselves killed and whatnot, but it's not like someone would get punished from going off and doing them. They might not get paid but complete enough on your own and youre bound to show youre capable enough

Rick

Ohh stop you can't cut it short ...you have the story and idea if you edit to much it slips ...just do you and let us read ..lol I enjoy the way your mind is working and I know that rabbit hole ...you did great

EU-Nox

I would like that

Tim Judge

Or longer. Shorter suits the serial nature as we read now, but this would fit as a good chapter when reading the future book

Jordan RiRi

I think they will have more solo time together when they head back to the depths

Ryan Berends

I think you did a great job and that it’s not too long. I love in depth worlds.

Jarryd

70 for the barding and 50 for knives in gold and silver - 120

retrorocket0

i was confused as well but it is including the barding which was mentioned in a seperate paragraph. As far as i can tell it is correct though.

James Skinner

Versimilitude is super important for a genuinely engrossing story. I'm rereading Ar'Kendrythist for the fourth time because of how every detail is so well thought out.

Nick Nicholson

I know, and I don’t like it.

Dax

A team was always coming. From the moment Ianmus and the Hiwiann scout girl both got interlude scenes. I imagine we'll bump into her sooner rather than later too, considering their caravan is parked outside the main gates.

Nick Nicholson

What are you talking about? He literally just read a bunch of jobs he and Porkchop could easily handle on their own. Forcing another team member on them is pointless

TETRATOLULENE

Jin nodded knowingly. “Oh yes, it does. Look, with how much those knives will fetch me, I'll be able to do the work on your barding overnight, throw in a self refilling waterskin, and fifty depths-gold in gold and silver for the knives. I recommend banking as much of the one-twenty as you can when you get an account, even if you do have a spatial artefact.” Are the prices correct in this paragraph?

Archivist0

The length doesn't matter. Just has to be interesting and relevant.

Nemanja Milosevic

How much gold they got for selling knives after underarmor inscription and waterskin...?

Noneya bezznes

Eh, treat the entire situation like how Shadow Slave did. You don't survive alone in the Dream Realm.

Mimic

Nah I liked how long it was city wise felt perfect. If you can make it even better though don't let me stop you

Nick Nicholson

I really don’t like the story direction that they are being forced into a team. I always liked their solo delving as a duo.


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