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B2 Chapter 168: Commute pt. 3

🕑 Added 2025-01-11 20:30:01 +0000 UTC

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Ricky Kukowski

Kaius laughed, and even Ianmus, for all of his differences to the meles, cracked a wide smile.  deference

Ricky Kukowski

"But ye weren’t, and ye didn’t.” Unesh replied, giving him a knowing nod. Umesh

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

lenkite

> bound by the bramble balls macerating tendrils MC has already lost fingers. Will [Lesser Regeneration] regenerate balls ?

Nate maresch

Will we ever get Ianmus or future team member stat sheets?

Nate maresch

Yeh he definitely had something in mind when he asked that

Jordan RiRi

Dry-heaved was the word I was trying to think of! Thank you, yes dry-heaved would be much better in that sentence.

Daniel Lee

I agree. Dry-heaved would be even better.

Jordan RiRi

This part made me think he had vomited: "The motion proved too much for the man, his chest heaving as he buckled over and retched." Maybe it could be swapped to 'dry-retched'? To make it more clear he keeps it together

Thomas V.

And his own personal mysteries and secrets, considering the future help he asked of Kaius

xXMetrinSlerbaXx

I'm liking Ianmus, he's personable and competent with his on intricasies.


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