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B2 Chapter 179: Mistakes, pt. 1

🕑 Added 2025-01-22 20:30:01 +0000 UTC

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Sebastian Lachs

There, posted. Be happy. Another chappy!

Sebastian Lachs

Challenge fucking accepted. You'll get your review. I will see your burnt out ass in Hel.

torrey deloach

Can I get mine added to the 24 hours? I mean when I looked and realized I hadn't ever reviewed it i felt bad and left one regardless. But I haven't been available to read lately due to school/life/work issues so today's my first day off since the 2nd of January... PWEASE!!

Noah Steinberg

Just submitted a review Want more chapter You rock dude

Me_Who_Else

Damn, Ro can go and pound sand. First the guild hazes them, then she talk to them that way. Mc should bow out of there because thats toxic as fuck.

Thomas V.

Nah man, Ro was great here. People questioning their rapid rise was so blindingly obvious to me that I was unpleasantly surprised to hear that they hadn’t even considered it, and Ro was absolutely hilarious in how she went about this. Totally correct, 100% justified, incredibly funny. Good stuff.

james belz

Holy shit minimum words not reached minimum words not reached Jesus I haven't had to write this much in so long who knew 200 words would take so long.

Nicholas Wright

Ok .. done mine ..

Leser

Challenge accepted. Please keep the daily going im addicted

Bloodorange17

Just counted 130ish advanced reviews updated today. Idk how many are new but damn did we turn out in force.

Bacon Macleod

Reviews for bonus chappies is a time honoured tradition - i'd be in trouble if I explicitly asked for good reviews, but otherwise its fine

beer

Challenge accepted.

whoknows

You should make it clear that you are just asking for reviews and that you will post chapters regardless of the ratings the reviewers provide. Otherwise you might fall foul of this RR rule: “Offering to release chapters based on the scores of reviews and ratings is considered ranking manipulation and is prohibited.”

TETRATOLULENE

Reviewed

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Kronos

Hahaha I’ll make it an advanced review just to keep daily releases going

Kronos

Tftc! “I have this nagging feeling in the back of my skull that we will need another Silver in Deadacre before the year is out, especially one who is as strong as you three might end up.” I think this sentence might flow better if Ro says she “will need another Silver team,” rather than just Silver.

William Boettcher

+1 advanced review

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Edit suggestion: in the case of -> in the course of

Bacon Macleod

Rush in comparison to everyone else - he's not gonna go in half cocked, but getting to the end of the tier will give him a lot of safety (he can always delay class evolution to shore things up if needed)

Flusspferd

Jup

Viria

I did my part

zazooki

I now know I can be bought, and my price is extra chappies. My old review is now advanced, and given a bit of a fluff. Now GIMME!

Nate maresch

Challenge accepted

DSeraph

Updated to advanced review. Gimme more chapters >=D

Light

Bro yoinked my first review and it was god damn worth it

Antiflower

Advanced review posted, broski

Hammy

Why is he rushing to T2? Doesn't he need to get his three pillars before that?

Kasim Charles-Walcott

Tftc and challenge accepted

Joaquim

damn, can i just repost my review from chapter 28?

BelligerentGnu

On the one hand, Ro's not wrong. On the other, fuck off, Ro. Also, tell the Guild about honours, Kaius. You need them strong too.

Alan Robinson

Did my best to leave something meaningful as a review. I'm usually a silent observer, keep up the good work!

Tim Judge

I see the young fella starting to realise he is a political ignoramus. wondering if the Hiwann girl is going to show his social ineptitude...tho he seems better on a personal level. review (homework) done.

Milan Seyed Mahmoud

I'll do anything for another chapter, even write a review. Can't wait for the extras!

Blather

Adv review posted. TFTC

Jeff McClure

I figured it out and hadn’t had a chance to comment here again. But, it’s good to have the instructions here just in case. Thanks, bro. Remember… you asked for this, sir. Enjoy the hard work.

Bacon Macleod

Youch, that’s happened to me more than one, surprisingly

Bacon Macleod

Just on the front page/ main page of the novel, you should see the section on the side bar of RR if you’re logged in

reventcake295

So... challenge accepted, and I wish you good luck with the 6 years of writing

lehmius

Well, now you practically forced me to write one. Sign me up for 6 years of this! TFTC!

Nick Nicholson

I tried. I really did. But I’m on an IPad and writing a 200 word review sucks. I almost got all the way to 200 words, the orientation on my IPad changed and the review erased itself. I was so close. So close.

James Skinner

Done, TFTC!

Jeff McClure

Just to clarify, are we leaving the review on the end of book 1?

Andrew Lewis

Adv. review posted! TFTC!


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