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B2 Chapter 200: Second Mission, pt. 3

🕑 Added 2025-02-12 20:30:01 +0000 UTC

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Alex

Always gotta add a rule that the favor has to be morally acceptable or sth. Killing a bunch of children doesnt threaten his life, so it would be allowed. Not that Ro seems to be the kind of person to request that type of favor. But you never know

Nùmenor

Congrats on 200 chapters - it’s been a fun ride.

Nùmenor

Or require him to slaughter hist first, second, and third born.

Anime Problem

Growth weapons have definitely got to be in some esoteric guild rules especially with how powerful they are the guild would want to boost them as high as they can go

BokkaBokka

if you disagree, disregard. this just became a pet peeve when an author did this (or felt like) every action that was taken. "Reiker was curious what Kaius had to say. "go on", he said, encouraging him to continue." etc etc. it's not a sin to leave things implied, or at the very least not repeat yourself! lol

BokkaBokka

just a bit of minor general feedback, the line '“Go on,” Rieker responded, encouraging him to continue.' is redundant and says the same thing twice. instead of repeating that Reiker indicated him to continue you could characterize his expression, Kaius' internal reaction, etc.

Dennis

Not just that but she now has a way to destroy him. By Platinum he will be completing missions that could potentially save thousands. All she has to do is require him to serve out his 3 days at time when he is needed elsewhere. For instance he is needed to stop an execution of someone she wants dead or perhaps he is in a tournament or race that she doesn't want him to win. Could be so easily abused.

J J

Saw the ghost chapter.. Thought someone finally kidnapped you to force more chapters out like in a certain story about a chat group I've read 😂

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Samuel McCarren

I've noticed you skip the secret sharing alot. I get it speeds the story along, and is probably a disproportionate effort to write, but it takes the fun out of a big reveal not hearing it first hand.

M van Dongen

She could require him to slaughter an army of mortals or 2 .....

Aureus

I think that the title is not appropriate for the last 3. 'Briefing in Secret' would be better as they are in a secret meeting area and more secrets are placed on the table. Also the mission hasn't truly begun.

Pierre Tadrus

He really should have added a morality clause or this is going to be possibly very messed up later for those 3 days.

Touch

3 days and with only without his life on the line? That’s first, second, and third born!

A B

Edit suggestion: gilded administrators -> guild administrators pouring over -> poring over

Jon Simpson

200 baby! Great stuff. Keep it up I'm hooked!

755

Congrats on 200


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