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B3 Chapter 392: A Cycle; an End, Finale
🕑 Added 2025-08-31 21:30:01 +0000 UTCUnder the guidance of an alien will, Kaius cycled. Together with the rest of his team, he’d suffered under the discomfort of his Authority being overruled.
There was a holiness in the air that offset some of the unease, instinctively crawling up his spine. As the Ascendant herself had said, it was an ancient rite, and Kaius could feel the weight of tradition deep in his bones. A mirror, to the halls of a long dead people they sat in.
It was bittersweet — to have the unvarnished truth of Ascendancy thrust so blatantly into their faces. How would it feel, he wondered, to outlast everything you had ever lived and loved?
The building was grand, but it was empty — almost desolate. He assumed the temple had been designed for tens of thousands, perhaps even hundreds of thousands.
Now there was only them, sat in a meditative circle under the brightest point of light that shone down from the ceiling fire above. The silence was broken only by their breathing, and an arrhythmic hum from Xenanra bored its way through flesh and bone to settle on the soul itself.
It was hypnotic, lulling him into a strange juxtaposition between focus and fugue. Within that haze, he delved deep within himself — guiding his essence in a cycle as Xenanra showed him the way.
It was like she was right there, side by side in the soul-space alongside him.
“You must use your intent and your will,” she had said. “Much like you split and guide your mana when inscribing, or how you have infused your soul to form your bonds in the past. Think of this as similar, albeit with a different purpose. Rather than a pool, imagine there is only your ever-dissipating regeneration. You must keep it steady; wrap it in a firm hand.”
That step alone had been difficult for him, for how new he was to wielding his Authority. Under her guidance, he flared his aspects bright and sought the mote in their center. It sparked and tingled in his grip — he could taste it with the same synesthesia he felt for mana. Yet rather than notes of war and battle, or life and growth, there was only the knowledge and the sense that it was his, encapsulating all that he was.
Setting it in a steady grip, he followed his teacher.
“Remember the wheel,” she said, “from outside to in. First the rim, then the spokes, then the center. Body, mind, soul, then suffuse through the self. Guide your essence to Corporus.”
It had been almost impossible — the multitasking required to flare his aspects, wrap his essence in Authority, apply enough pressure that it couldn’t dissipate, and then infuse it into Corporus? It was demanding enough that, even with his Glass Mind, he slipped and faltered.
The mote flickered, threatened to disperse and be regenerated once more.
Each time, Kaius had to swallow his revulsion as Xenanra’s grip settled over him — oil sliding between his very pores to force his movements just so, stabilising it once more.
Then the essence hit his Aspect, and he felt it wash through his pillar — his body; his actions and drive. He remembered every aching wound and burning heave all at once.
Caught off guard, his grip on his Authority trembled as his essence vanished into Corporus.
Had he done it right? Did the essence fill it that utterly?
The briefest of moments passed, and he noticed the mote reappear — now suspended directly above his first Aspect.
He gasped at the titanic effort of it, wondering how anyone was ever supposed to do more than just this. Even with an Ascendant’s guidance, he struggled. This could take days
Xenanra plucked something within him — a pinch to his soul that felt like getting slapped on the back of the head. She tisked at him audibly.
“You are a fool,” she had said. “The speed with which all of you progress is remarkable — not the fastest I have ever seen — that would be impressive, given how little resources and knowledge is present on your world — but still in the upper reaches. I’ve taught people who took weeks just to suffuse their first pillar, even with my guidance. There have been many more who failed to flare their fire. We move on. You can do it.”
He did as she willed. Under her guidance, Kaius directed his essence mote counterclockwise until it rushed in through the peak of his Pillar Mentis.
As it filled the construct, he was flooded with indecision — a thousand choices, of every moment of impulse, every lesson learned, and every desire he’d ever had to strive and succeed. In that whirling moment, he grappled with this Authority.
Xenanra held him steady, until he firmed his will once more.
His essence shifted again — drenching Animus, where he was flooded with the joy and exaltation of life; of the richness of meat after slaving over a burning fire for hours; of the sweetness of wine drunk at the end of a hard day; of the singing blood during the hardest of battles. Every challenge and every triumph, every moment he remembered why he pushed so hard and found the satisfaction that he did.
From there, he floundered. The last step was the self — but what did that mean? As far as he knew his pillars were him.
Xenanra showed him the way, guiding his vision inwards, down below his pillars, to the flame of the soul — a twin to the fire of his aspects.
“The self,” she said reverently. “Guide your essence down. Let it dissipate through the heat of your being, utterly — and when it is fully dispersed, create the channel through which it will flow back to the outer edge of the wheel.”
With a steady hand, she firmed his resolve and led him on. His essence moved through the two perpendicular rings of his skill-shards, through his class construct — a weave created from what he now assumed to be something akin to essence — and then to his deepest self.
Wrapping his authority around his central flame, his essence dispersed and fuelled the fire. His soul surged white and hot.
There was no vision, no sense of impressions — only the surety of knowledge of who he was; what he wanted, and how he would get it.
Following his teacher, he spun his authority into a funnel around his soul. As dispersed flakes of essence rose like embers, they were caught — directed upwards into the flame of his Aspects. Stoked and tempered by the movement, it gathered once more, a mote hovering in wait.
A cycle.
And so they continued. With every revolution, Xenanra’s influence softened and retreated, only prodding him when he faltered; reminding him of what to do when he hesitated.
Again and again he cycled, awash in a moment of sensation and revelation.
Until, all at once, he was doing it alone and unguided.
As his grip grew weary and his authority strained, he saw very little change within him for the effort. His aspects were unchanged, and his soul looked as it ever had.
He persisted, knowing that the benefits would come in the future, until the exertion finally grew too much and his grip slipped entirely.
A chime sounded in his mind, and Kaius snapped his eyes open with a gasp, seeing the notification that sprawled across his vision.
*Ding! Significant Feat of Strength performed under Observation. You have been awarded an Honour: The Wheel Turns*
An honour.
Kaius grinned, though he didn’t dive into its description immediately. Wanting to check on his team, he looked around. Their circle was still silent and steady, the very air weighed down by the presence of Xenanra’s authority as she hummed that hypnotic note endlessly.
Porkchop and Kenva still sat with their eyes closed, focused frowns on their faces — but Ianmus watched him from across their circle, a wide grin spilling across his face.
Kaius scowled good naturedly, narrowing his eyes at the man. The mage had come first — bastard had probably gotten the bonus.
It wasn’t too much of a shock — Ianmus always had been the most experienced with energy weaving of all of them. While his glyphs were complex and dense, his casting style was one focused on form, the runes themselves shaping the intent needed. Ianmus’s free-casting, sorcery, and key-seals relied much more on a similar style of control to what they’d used to cycle.
“I won.” Ianmus mouthed. His lips were easy to read, thanks to enhanced senses and quick cognition.
Kaius cocked his brow, giving the mage a look. “Bonus?” he questioned.
Ianmus nodded, grinning wildly. “First in your cohort. Check it out.”
The Wheel Turns:
Honour
Junior: if you wish to Ascend, you MUST dare.
Awarded to those who successfully learn to cycle. Provides a Minute increase to control of Authority. +5 all stats, +3% all stats.
Kaius withheld his desire to whistle. The additional stats were nice, and he could only assume that more control over Authority was a good thing — Ianmus had made off handsomely.
Still, what most impressed him was that the Honour was available to anyone who learnt cycling. The more of that kind they discovered, the more they could encourage others to pursue them — and nurture exactly the kind of path takers that would help the world survive the integration.
Sure, it wouldn’t be easy. They’d need to gain access and best a Crucible, but they were still accessible. If a team was dedicated, they could spend a fair amount of time at the peak of tier one to prepare and ensure their success. Given they had the requisite drive, of course.
Giving Ianmus an appreciative nod, Kaius settled into silence as they waited for the rest of his team to finish their training.
It didn’t take long — over the next hour, both Porkchop and Kenva came out of their focused trance.
They were all smiles — beaming at each other as Xenanra sat there. The Ascendant’s eyes were closed, and she continued her ethereal hum for another minute before it cut out. As the noise trailed into nothing, she opened her eyes and smiled warmly at them.
“Congratulations, for you have achieved something that few ever obtain.” She shuffled, adjusting so that she kneeled on her cushion. “I hope you will allow me some ceremony — to celebrate this moment as my people once did.”
Xenanra swiped her hands through the air, and a small cup appeared in front of each of them. Barely large enough for a mouthful, there was a dark green liquor inside — smelling strongly of the acrid bite of alcohol, but also carrying a potent hint of magic and alchemical reagents. One that smelled of joy and succour.
Xenanra raised her cup. “But beware its bite. It’s quite strong.”
Kaius coughed, his eyes watering as he downed the shot of liquor. It was potent and medicinal, steeped in cracking thunder and the crunch of autumn leaves. His reaction was mild compared to Porkchop — who spluttered as he suppressed a retch.
Kaius shot him a teasing grin. “Cant hold your drink?”
“Shut up — it’s disgusting and you know it.”
Once they all placed their cups down, Xenanra got to her feet and nodded at them.
“And with that, our lesson is done. Congratulations, for you have bested this Crucible. You may stay here a while, but once you are ready I will summon another portal — an exit to the spire, so that you may rejoin the Depths once more, in the same place you left.”
“How long will it have been?” Porkchop asked. “I assume there has been some level of time compression involved.”
“There has,” Xenanra nodded. “About a week, give or take a day. Not all that long.”
Kaius sighed in relief — depending on her answer, he’d been ready to suggest they cut down their hunt for honours somewhat. Thankfully, they had even more time than he dared hope.
A simple week, for all that they had gained? Well worth the trade off in his opinion.
Still, he had one remaining question. Throughout it all, Xenanra had insisted that cycling was optional. It seemed anything but, if it was so integral for later steps of the Path.
“If cycling becomes critical later, wouldn’t its requirement hamper people’s ability to progress?”
The ascendant nodded. “You’re right — and that is by design. The further you progress, the more you are funneled towards Crucibles to be tested. I will allow you to know one thing: now that you have learned cycling, future Crucibles will not be as vital to visit. They are fundamentally places of learning — if you run into a roadblock of lacking capability or lacking understanding on the path, you should seek them out to learn the steps you must take. Otherwise, do not worry over much.”
“I suppose we will see them quite often then,” Kaius said, considering that their world had no tradition of taking the path.
“You may or may not. Later in the path, individuality begins to reign supreme - the advice and guidance provided in the crucibles becoming more abstract and theoretical. Regardless, some may be similar to what you've experienced here, and provide optimum conditions for making progress which you would otherwise struggle to seize. Regardless, the assistance is not as critical as learning to cycle in the first place.”
Kaius nodded. It was good to know — though, until more steps of the Path were unlocked, he would need to wait and see if they were truly the kind to strive ahead without a waypoint to follow
He imagined they would be more likely to need assistance than those on a more established world. If the steps of the Path were a known thing, he could see how a Crucible could become a place of acceleration and assistance, rather than a necessity.
While he didn’t have any more questions, Kaius was surprised at the melancholy he felt — a creeping disappointment that their time with Xenanra was done. It was not every day that you had an Ascendant all but at your beck and call, not just for guidance but to simply interact and converse with.
Xenanra gave him a slight smile.
“Will we ever see you again?” Porkchop asked, as Kaius felt a similar feeling cross their bond.
“Climb high enough, and you might just find out. Integrations are times of exciting events, where what would otherwise be rarely seen becomes common place. Certainly, I will be watching your rise with great interest. Ones that initiate the second stage and maintain their lead, such as you, are rare.”
“And it doesn’t get lonely, waiting here for people to arrive?” Kenva asked.
Xenanra bent over laughing, propping herself up with a hand on one knee. “By the boundless, no. A bare fragment of me is here — you can consider it analogous to your Glass Mind: an existence running in parallel. I have plenty to occupy my attention. What's more, more people discover my Crucibles by the day. The vast majority do not meet the requirements to enter, but word will spread soon enough — at least as I consider such things. I will have plenty to do.”
Kaius blinked at the unexpected admission — that of more people coming across her Crucibles. They really should make their way back to Deadacre soon and spread what they had learned. To claim the credit, at the very least, for being the first ones to share this knowledge with the Guild, and the wider society as a whole.
They still had some time — there was a good chance that even if others had the opportunity to share before them, they most likely wouldn’t. The culture of secrecy of their world had wormed its way too deep. While some might share it with their dynasty, closest friends, or perhaps even a wider clan, doing so with an institution such as the Guild? He wasn’t so sure. Still, he didn’t like the idea of leaving it to chance.
First, a quick jaunt hunting Honours, then evolving their classes, and then they would leave. They could risk that much — Honours were too important.
Kaius rose to his feet and gave Xenanra his deepest bow.
“Thank you,” he said, “for what you have taught me and everything I have learned. I have not had such a dedicated teacher since my father.”
“High praise coming from you. Thank yourself for being so steadfast in your resolve to grow strong. All of you have proven yourself worthy of those who walk the Path.”
She waved them off. “Now, you have things to do and monsters to slay. I suggest you make haste and struggle hard, for the integration will leave you behind if you do not — and that would be a terrible sight for me to see.”
As she flicked her finger, Kaius felt the Ascendant’s authority pulse, and an arch was suddenly before them — filled with a void of familiar black. Kaius snapped between it and his team. They gave him a nod, before giving their own thanks as they bowed and graced the Ascendant for her assistance…
… and stepped through the portal.
An eyeblink later, he found himself standing on a platform of void glass that was inscribed with the burning runes of the system’s own design.
At his back, an obelisk towered into the sky, stark and imposing on the alpine plateau. The sun glittered off its glossy surface. It was magnificent, as eye-catching as the first time he had seen it.' To their front, mountains rose, covered in tussock and snow.
Directly across from them was the familiar sight of a flattened peak. Deep within his soul, Kaius felt himself tugged towards its summit. A Guardian.
Their next target.
Before he could check on his team and plan their route, another notification sprawled across his vision.
*Ding! Significant Feat of Strength performed under Observation. You have been awarded an Honour: Paver of Ways*
Paver of Ways:
Honour
It’s a fucking nightmare out there, man. Everyone keeps wanting things from me, and I don’t know how to tell them I'm just a dude who likes kicking ass and smoking grass.
Awarded to those in one of the first five teams to complete a Crucible amongst a cohort. Provides a Minute increase to control of Authority. +5 all stats, +3% all stats.
Bonus: For every team member succeeding, the stat bonus is increased to +8 all stats, +4% all stats. Additional reward bonus is increased to Slight.
Comments
Brahman Brahman
Kaius did not get the first bonus so it’s without
SodaBoBomb
Loved the arc overall, GREAT character development. It did start to drag juuuuust a bit, but nothing too bad.
Corey S
So the stats for “The Wheel Turns” is with Ianmus’ bonus? Or without
sb3n
So now that the Crucible arc is done, I want to throw in my two cents too. First of all, absolutely fantastic idea to tie personal goals and philosophies to power-ups. Give characters space to develop while scratching that abstract "numbers go brrrrr" feeling. I binged the whole arc, reading from the moment they entered to here, and even this way, I'm have to say, I feel how Kaius' second trial was a bit of a slog. It was still enjoyable and fun to watch him realise how it works, and I see how it being years long would mean that it needs its space, yet I agree that it needs to be a bit shortened. I know I'm treading months old ground and it's already clear it needs a rework for publishing. It's terribly late (or at this point early), so I hope I'm not saying anything that was said before, but a few points of improvement could be to follow all the characters simultaneously, not just with Porkchop. Kaius could be a bit more reckless in the beginning of the second trial, so his first death comes sooner, and it really hammers home the point about the ease he falls to the Bloodsong. Probably not the greatest, but criticism without mentioning what bothered me would be just rude. Anyway, despite these, amazing arc, will read quite well in book format, and keep up the astonishing work!
Jayson Benedict
Banger of a arc, I had to leave royal road and hop on here I was so excited and you delivered my guy!
Albadia
So good. So. Good.
