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B3 Chapter 393: Winter’s Scorn, pt. 1

🕑 Added 2025-09-02 21:30:03 +0000 UTC

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Crazyone47

Can I suggest The Challenge for a title?

Eidetic Eidolon

No offense, man, but you've been getting wordier and wordier. I was hoping it would stop after the crucible, but this entire chapter doesn't need to exist. They've been sitting, talking, and eating for 10+ chapters now. It just seems pointless for them to do it all over again after teasing that they are now badasses ready to commit to badassery. Here's hoping this boss fight doesn't go on for multiple chapters. While the sitting, talking, and eating can be argued as character development, multiple chapter fights are just boring and dreary. Even in movies, with over-the-top special effects, long fights can be tedious. In books it's just...tepid.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Justin

Title ideas: A) The Three Pillars, B) Animus, C) The First Step, D) Ignition

Robert Gardner

TFTC

CF Sapper

For the book title you could call it Runebalde: The Pillar Forge.


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