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B3 Chapter 413: Argent Clash, pt. 3

🕑 Added 2025-09-23 21:30:03 +0000 UTC

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Justin

I think you should go back and read the Arc POVs again. I don't think he is shaping up to be the character you think he is.

Joe Black

Thank you for the chapter. Great arc over all. I do think if you are going to go back and edit for a future release though you need to take a serious look at your use of the Arc character. His introduction was shapping him up to be some final boss character, and he had no impact on the actual story. I would honestly recommend you cut him out entirely. The lack of payoff for the amount of set up was not worth it to the reader. Alternatively you could have him as a mini boss in the start of the next book where he comes in and gets revenge for the death of Old Yon and almost kills the kids after humbling them then learns they were being tortured and he turns around. Idk but I would say its the weakest part of this book more than the trail was which was fine after the first two stages imo.

Andrew Omeara

What a chapter. So worth the wait. Love it.

Robert Gardner

TFTC. At least one dead and who knows now many others, two running so out of 11? there is only 8? who could still fight and is if everyone else survied the Starfall and is in condition to fight

Matt

Fantastic chapter! So looking forward to more and I’m sad that tomorrow hasn’t come yet. The clean up fight should be really good!!

Brett

I actually hope that they turn around and help the party at some point to try to buy their own survival. Think of it this way, the world for those without backing is fucking horrendous. You do what you need to survive. They will continue to do that and it won’t be to oppose kaius and co because that’s signing their own death warrant.


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