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B2 Chapter 247: Bonefields, pt. 1 (real)

🕑 Added 2025-04-02 21:51:42 +0000 UTC

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ManguKing

In a world where there are oath stones it makes no sense why a guild would not make sure to purge any unwanted members

Grant

Loving the story though!

Grant

I enjoy the capture--I think it follows logically from their former actions/the world around them and is a good way to introduce new characters--but between the talk here and Reiker's warning before they leave for this mission it is signposted far too explicitly. It not only removes a lot of tension from the coming ambush, which we already have notice of from the Old Yon chapter right before, but lays out exactly how they are going to escape from the jail. I think perhaps a form of this conversation while they are waiting for Ro after the drake kill would make it all flow more organically that they are prepping for the eventuality but not clearly hanging a neon light on the plot development.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Dax

Unless, of course, he has heard specific rumors about their discovery. But he has not, so it just feels too "convenient".

Dax

Honestly, I think Reikers talk about enemy discovery should have happened last mission. He should also have told them to keep the comms amulet once they returned from it to use just in case instead of giving them a new one this time. It feels too artificial for things to happen immediately after he warns them.


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