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B2 Chapter 257: Confinement, Finale

🕑 Added 2025-04-12 21:30:03 +0000 UTC

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ManguKing

Cliffhanger at the end of a book??? Not my story, so let me shut up

Irgendwer Irgendwo

Very disappointing place to end a book. It was already strange to treat weeks of horrible torture as a relaxing team building exercise but now the whole second book is just about our protagonists becoming more passive and merely reacting to events. Seriously, we went from Kaius making years-long plans to slowly just doing exactly what the guildmaster tells him to now sitting in a cell getting tortured for a month even though he could have escaped at any moment. This needed to end with them taking agency again and escaping to the Depths. Alternatively, end it with being captured then the new book starts with an escape arc and meeting the next party member.

Noah

Weird place to end a book. It should be after they escape.

Dark Prophet

I'm surprised that the book ends here. Weird place to end the book. i would have thought they would show the escape and then them diving back into the depths. Then book 3 would kick off in a kind of similar place to book 1 with Kaius and Porkchop having come full circle.


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