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B3? Interlude 5: Strange Tidings

🕑 Added 2025-04-13 21:30:03 +0000 UTC

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ManguKing

This is not the way. Have him escape by his own merit and not by plot armor. Dont harm your own story

Dax

Thanks for the chapter! This is interesting. Are they responding to the same thing that caused the large crash at the facility holding Kaius and co, perhaps? Or is this something else ... I'm glad about the book endpoint being shifted back a ways. It'll be much more satisfying and make more sense for the arc to finish up first.

Samuel McCarren

Yeah you want them to actually escape by the end of the book or the main story arc for the book is still in progress. Ideally it would then include a 'hook' or cliff to the next arc e.g. escaping into the depths.


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