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B3? Interlude 6: Myriad Developments

🕑 Added 2025-04-14 21:30:03 +0000 UTC

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MorningDawn

I think this is a great interlude to take place after the ending with the boys. It's familiar characters and gives another view - I'm binging through this at the moment, and having to go to a completely new set of characters right after that ending doesn't jell for me - to the point I skipped ahead to see if there was something that would be a better bookend, which this absolutely is - a great epilouge. Thanks for writing ( and I'll definitely go back to that chapter, once I'm done with the rest!)

Irgendwer Irgendwo

This latest interlude makes the last arc come together but some of the timeline is still quite muddled. The way I think it's supposed to go is: * Starts with Rieker and Ro sending them on their last mission * 2 weeks later, the group makes it to the dogs, fights them and gets captured * At 3-4 weeks since the start, She wakes up and starts drawing beasts to her * At 5 weeks, Rieker is worried that the group is late (because they're 1 week overdue and their mission was 2 weeks each way) * At 6ish weeks, the governor makes a deal with Rieker including investigating criminals in Deadacre * At 8ish weeks, She causes an earthquake which kicks off the group's escape attempt (because they've been imprisoned very near Deadacre for a month at this point). If I have the timeline mostly right, then IMO the two interludes should come in right after they are captured and that's how book 2 ends. Then book 3 starts with their time in captivity, meeting the fourth party member and so on.

le moi

Thanks

Dax

Nice to see some of the rumblings, great and small. Thanks for the chapter!

Brandon Wilburn

Should be tenet, not tenant


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