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B3? Chapter 263: Escape, pt. 4

🕑 Added 2025-04-20 21:30:03 +0000 UTC

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ManguKing

I thought that it was 5 guards not 2

Mccarry

Just caught up to current posts today after finding this series a week ago on RR. I can’t put it down!! Thank you very much for the dedication you have shown to your writing. I have thoroughly enjoyed this series. I also applaud you for continuing to grow as a writer. You seek feedback, you act on it and have stayed humble along the way (very Kiwi of you). I read ALOT and have been reading fantasy for 40 years. I honestly think you have the breadth of talent that it takes to succeed at this full time. Strengths I observe (not in order) 1. You create interesting characters 2. Interactions and dialogue feel real but in a concise way. 3. You avoid the painful bits that I think you also don’t enjoy reading… 4. You have created an interesting world 5. Pacing is good, but agree that ideally our Ranger would have entered earlier- still worked though. Single reader request (dismiss it safely knowing I am not a writer so don’t know what I am talking about) (maybe) keep deepening the world/ society. Don’t take it too far but you have some powerful themes/ ideas established that you can play with. Elaborating only to illustrate Things like: 1 social changes from non sharing of information to some collectivism 2. adventuring guards and how that changes their role. 3 Culture of Ranger. Make it distinct. Think of how well it was done in name of the wind with society where facial expressions meant so much. Anyway. Main points. Thank you. You rock! I neeeed more

Kendelle Trotter

I honestly thought it might be a Tyrant. There were some hints.


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