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B3 Chapter 328: Next Steps, pt. 2

🕑 Added 2025-06-28 21:30:01 +0000 UTC

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Léon Geide

Chapter critique: I find the pacing of the conversation upon Ianmus’ awaking highly weird. Not like you’d just go full “here’s a truly concise summary of my bodily changes” right after awakening from a freakin’ two day coma! — same for the others’ reactions, especially Kenva just going “oh, alright, you’re not crippled, so let’s go back to our dailies” I mean, we as reader kinda know all’s well, but still… give it some room in this chapter :)

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Corey S

Suggested edits: “I hit a limit in how much I could power I could control after filtering my mana through three metamagics.” to “I hit a limit in how much power I could control after filtering my mana through three meta magics.” “I managed to iron out the last of the geometry, but I could get it to click” to “I managed to iron out the last of the geometry, but I couldn’t get it to click”


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