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B3 Chapter 347: Entrance, Finale

🕑 Added 2025-07-20 02:19:04 +0000 UTC

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mattias hessleryd

"His stomach clenched in anticipation as he nodded" "eyed his reborn blade with a mixture of trepidation" "uncaring of their trepidation." Kaius reads as someone with anxiety issues. Whenever someone is injured during combat he feels "sick to my stomach" etc. I don't have a problem with it. But it feels unintentional - which makes it jaring. Love the story otherwise.

Justin

"Whether than potential" >that

Justin

I was hoping one of them would think to ask for the lost primer on legacies.


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