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B3 Chapter 350: Perseverance, Finale

🕑 Added 2025-07-22 21:26:54 +0000 UTC

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Manu Sniter

agree on all, also the massive amounts of gpt em-dash has started bothering me.

Corey S

I enjoyed the hallucination aspect! It had me rereading thinking what?? Till I understood what was going on. Suggested edits: this could be just me thinking it but I feel the italics has become a little much. I understand it for skills and the like, but adding that kind of emphasis in multiple sentences back to back removes all of the weight trying to be conveyed. I’ve started reading like they aren’t emphasized and it reads better in my head that way, but again this could just be me. I’m still loving the story!

Jonas Sorgalla

Chapter was awesome as always :D Any hypotheses what this strange power could be that Kaius feels? The growing seed? Some kind of doa stuff?


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