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B4 Chapter 487: Plight of the Living, pt. 5

🕑 Added 2026-01-11 03:43:02 +0000 UTC

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gray matter

I see everyone else is positive so that’ll let me complain a bit, sorry. Everything’s written well, story is good. My criticism here is this little mini story and its length. It felt like we were cutting everything else short or being brief. We didn’t really dive into Kaius’s conversation with the rune masters or go deep into the magic theory with the mages so when this crisis came up I expected it to be two chapters ish. I don’t dislike anything about these chapters but I’m worried I may be in a pre burn out for the siege chapters and tyrant fight. Unless you have a plan to make that shorter than expected with 7-8 chapters of this my worry is that for over a month I’m gonna load up a mid fight chapter everyday and that is going to just have me skimming or wait till I see tyrant finale and skim all of them at once while pausing on alt POVs.

M van Dongen

I do hope Kaius levels.


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