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SB: Chapter 70 – Mana Manipulation Instruction

🕑 Added 2025-09-10 22:18:30 +0000 UTC

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Mister Vii

I need to include training chapters for skills. This is literally a LITRPG/Progression. I can skip all the training, then people would ask where is the training? Training by its nature is doing the same thing over and over again.

Wes Brown

Another pointless chapter filled with exposition that could be fit into a few paragraphs. Most of this info you've gone over already. Yes, your putting out 3or 4 chapters a day, but they a literally just talking about world building, rules, your reasons for XYZ, this doesn't add to the story in a meaningful way. You didn't even finish the scene that you started the chapter on .. we got like two paragraphs of story progression then like 8 of exposition. Not good.

신현준

Gracias


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