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SB: Chapter 211 – Interlude 27

🕑 Added 2025-10-19 01:49:50 +0000 UTC

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MO

Hey man, just wanted to give some feedback. I didn't like this chapter when I read it, but I'm coming back to it a few days later in case the feedback helps you at all. As a reader, adding extra challenges to meet the person the MC, arguably, cares the most about feels like a cockblock. Now the fact that we feel anything at all means we're invested in the characters. And we would all be spitting mad if we know our moms had to go through something so bullshit like that. I did want to say, however, that I haven't thought about this much in the newer chapters, so while this may be a friction point for some, I got over it quickly, especially with the hints you placed that it may not end up in the worst situation. Might get some spicier comments on royalroad though, since we all pay to be here haha.

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Gracias

Achis74

So he has a tier 7 skill now?


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