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Chapter 246: Merinmian True Form*
🕑 Added 2025-09-13 09:35:48 +0000 UTC[Author Note: I was never entirely happy with the first two chapters of the novel, and many people expressed that they could be better. Because of this, I have now gone back and rewritten them.
I turned Chapter 1 into a small Prologue while Chapter two has a bit more background before the Jenny incident, which I have shrunk down because it was too convoluted.
I will upload them to Patreon for you all to read if you wish to.]
[[You know the rest of them are going to be waiting for us,]] Adam messaged as he saw Lorelie swimming towards him from the direction of her dressing room.
She had asked Adam to wait a few minutes while she went and grabbed her stuff before going to meet everyone.
“No, they're not. I told them all to go on ahead,” Lorelie replied with a playful smirk.
[[Why did you do that?]]
“Because I wanted some alone time with you and to take you somewhere,” Lorelie replied before grasping Adam’s hand and leading him out of the Royal Palace arena.
[[Where are we going?]]
“It’s a surprise, but I guarantee you will love it.”
[[I’m sure I will as long as it's with you.]]
Lorelie smiled happily at his response before saying, “Flatterer.”
[[Don’t pretend you didn’t like it.]]
“I wasn’t planning to, feel free to flatter me as much as you want.”
After leaving the Royal Palace arena, Lorelie pulled Adam into a hug before she swished her tail to make them speed through the water.
Adam looked around in amazement because he had no idea that Lorelie could actually swim so fast.
Adam watched as they passed different sea creatures and vegetation until Lorelie finally slowed down and stopped at the edge of an underwater ravine. A gap several meters across opened up that plummeted down so far that Adam couldn’t make out the bottom.
However, on the other side of the ravine, slightly lower than where they floated, was a magnificent coral reef that stretched as far as the eye could see. Coral of a multitude of different colours could be seen as fish and other aquatic creatures swam or crawled between them.
Adam looked out over the beautiful sight, enraptured by its pure beauty.
“Beautiful, isn’t it?” Lorelie said as she also stared out over the reef with a happy smile.
Adam didn’t have the words to express how beautiful it was, so he just nodded in agreement as he continued to stare at it.
“You know this place has a special name,” Lorelie said as she held Adam’s chin and turned his face so that they stared into each other's eyes.
Adam raised a questioning eyebrow upon hearing Lorelie’s words.
“It’s called ‘Lovers Ravine’ and it has a special legend regarding it.
They say that if you and your partners first intercourse is done here, then there is a chance that two love fish will appear. If they do appear and share a kiss, then it means your relationship is blessed by the sea god, and the two of you will spend the rest of your lives together.”
Adam showed a surprised look before asking.
[[Are you saying you want your first time to be here with me?]]
Lorelie giggled before saying, “Hehe, do I really need to spell it out for you?”
After speaking, she reached up for Adam’s aqua breather before asking, “Do you trust me, Adam?”
Adam nodded without hesitation, making Lorelie smile even more before saying, “Then let me take your breather.”
Lorelie reached up and removed the breather from Adam’s mouth and couldn’t help but giggle when she saw him holding his breath before she cupped his cheeks and kissed him.
Adam was first surprised by the sudden kiss and then surprised when he felt oxygen entering his body through the kiss before going down into his lungs, allowing him to breathe.
Adam suddenly understood that Lorelie was somehow using her body to extract the oxygen from the water before transferring it over to him through their kiss.
No longer concerned about having to breathe, Adam wrapped his arms around Lorelie and pulled her close while deepening the kiss.
Lorelie didn’t resist and welcomed the deepening kiss as she started to push her tongue into Adam’s mouth and began a tongue battle with him while she continued to feed him oxygen.
Lorelie’s hands started to move up Adam’s back until they found his hair as she started to run her hands through it, while Adam’s hands descended towards Lorelie’s plump ass and started to grope and squeeze it.
As their kiss deepened and they both enjoyed the sensation brought about by the other, they lost track of time and floated at the edge of the ravine for an unknown amount of time until finally Lorelie indicated that she wanted to break the kiss by pushing gently on Adam’s chest and waving the breather.
Adam broke the kiss as he held his breath, as Lorelie carefully placed the breather back in his mouth before she drifted back slightly in the water and said, “You have seen me naked in my human form, my love, now see me naked in my true form. Cancel Form Bracelet.”
As she finished speaking, the clothes she was wearing started to ripple before appearing as if they were melting away. The form bracelet retracted into the dozens of small sections before they flowed across Lorelie's now naked body and combined into the Form Bracelet's original form, which rested on Lorelie’s wrist.
Adam stared at the now completely naked Lorelie, who floated in the ocean before him. He had, of course, seen her naked many times during their nighttime exercises, but that was always in her human form and not in her true form.
While her upper body remained the same with her perfect waistline, seductive curves and ample bosom, it merged seamlessly into her lower half, which was now her Merinmian tail. Adam always found Lorelie’s naked human form intoxicating in that he could stare at it for hours; however, it paled in comparison to her true form. He wasn’t sure why, when all that had really changed was a pair of legs for a tail; however, just seeing her in this form made him feel that this was how she should always appear, and her human form was an insult to her beauty.
As he admired her naked true form from her long, turquoise hair that floated in the ocean all the way down to her tail fins, he suddenly noticed something he had never seen before.
Located at a similar level to where it would be in her human form, was what looked like her vigina, however, instead of being the pink it normally was, it was now the same colour as her tail, making it slightly difficult to notice at first.
“I hope you like my naked true form, as it now belongs to you, my love and no other man will ever see it,” Lorelie declared with a slight blush of embarrassment.
Adam reached out his hand to grab hers before pulling her into a tight hug while he ran his hand through her long turquoise hair.
Lorelie returned the hug as she closed her eyes and, with a small smile on her lips, until eventually she moved her mouth up towards Adam’s ear and said seductively, almost pleadingly, “Now take me, Adam, make me your woman.”
As she said that, she rubbed his crotch before starting to undress him.
Adam didn’t resist and simply allowed her to undress him since it seemed to be something she wanted to do herself, and soon they both floated naked in the water, admiring each other's bodies.
Lorelie reached out with one hand and grabbed Adam’s cock before she started to slowly wank it off for him while her other hand slid down to her Merinmian pussy and started to rub it as soft moans escaped her lips and her eyes locked onto Adams as she enjoyed the look of desire he gave her as he watched her play with both hearsef and him at the same time.
“After tonight, my love, you will be able to use my body however you wish and make love to me every night along with Stacey.”
Lorelie felt Adam’s cock twitch and harden slightly as she seductively spoke words she knew he would enjoy and which she honestly meant.
She was already deeply attracted to Adam when they met again on Terrana Five, and that attraction only grew as the two of them went on a date.
As she spent time in his stream and with him personally, she learned what sort of man he was. Lorelie truly fell in love with Adam and was willing to give her everything to him. She was already willing to spend the rest of her life with Adam.
The only reason she had waited this long to give her virginity to him was because she wanted it to be special, to be done in this place.
Lorelie didn’t care how many other lovers Adam ended up with as long as she could be one of them, and he learned to love her as she had him.
She, like Stacey, was well aware that what happened to Adam’s previous girlfriend, Jenny, was somehow stopping him from truly falling in love with them. She could tell he was deeply attracted to her and that he truly wanted to spend the rest of his life with her, like she did with him.
However, something was stopping him from giving his heart to them completely.
Comments
Sinful Cyanide
Lol, Lorelie is talking all about how special losing her virginity to Adam is, but all I can think about is how many firsts she had with Stacey instead and that this is one of the few tines she went further with Adam first rather than Stacey. Wonder if Stacey would have brought out a strapon if Lorelie would even still be a virgin in this scene, lmao
Sylphie
Noooooo why did it have to stop here?! Lmao
