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79. Compulsory Quest

🕑 Added 2025-08-16 11:47:39 +0000 UTC

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John

Read the next chapter where it says he stole the guard uniform. I know it's a small detail but that's the kind of thing that would be caught in proof-reading. I like the plot and direction of this story and I think it's a pretty good book. Which is why I find the distinct lack of proof-reading such a let down to the overall quality of the work. There's consistent mistakes in terms of sentences with negatives that don't make sense, or are so unclear you have to reread them multiple times to guess at what the author means. The lack of typos leads me to believe some kind of ai tool was used to clean them up. That's not a problem in of itself, but when you don't check the result yourself you get corrected sentences that make no sense, or are very awkwardly phrased. It's because this is otherwise a really good story that these kinds of simple fuck ups are so disheartening.

John

"There were the heavily armed units, and the more speedy ones that wore light or no armor at all, preferring leather pieces hardened with alchemical concoctions. Lukas opted for the latter, picking the most worn and stained pieces. " From where? Where did he get pieces of the guards armor? Did he steal them? Did he just happen to have them? Feels like an reasonably important detail that is ignored.

Noah

Yeah, I really feel like he should have gone for the text. He benefits from any knowledge even beyond the Codex’s expanded powers.

Ben Bass

TYFTC! With his current skill set, the skulking is well suited to Lukas. Although he is going to have to learn about wards that might not detect him, however will notice the absence of his weight when he leaves.

Joel Magnuson

I'm still hoping that he'll get both the dragon artifact/creature/what ever from the caves and the text from the beast on the mountain tops


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