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SSR - Chapter 88: Finals (3)

🕑 Added 2025-02-19 21:04:25 +0000 UTC

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Dave_S

Thanks for the chapter!

Book-Wyrm

I think in an earlier pov he said he learned it all himself

Haley Abbott

I'm curious who Hayden's teacher is.

Docnox

I can’t help but feel the way this chapter ended is actually how it should’ve started as most. The fight on this chapter felt like just repeats of stuff earlier.

Joanie

For some feedback, the whisle might be unnecessary. The previous sentence indicates that he is surprised by what he is seeing. In other chapters I remember him whistling. Might just be how he is, but if it's a way to attract our attention, it might be unnecessary. Anyway thanks for the chapter!

Gopard

Yeah injuries especially their descriptions are a bit strange still I agree I have little experience with either magic, holes in body parts and the effect of magical system physical Stats on the body though so its hard to say how much there should be changed or clarified lol? I could see us directly after this tournament get the first lecture of the academy "On Stats and the System and what it does for your bodies in detail" like a great equalizer to get the village kids (and ignorant Readers) to the same level as the Noble scions or sponsored geniuses^^

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter! Am just at the wind blades part and was thinking: This would be where as Damien said if Rylan got close with his sword now and just forced the shield to stay up because otherwise he cuts you up he wins by almost default, faster even without mana cultivation, way to good at footwork and swordplay to ever let the opponent get out of range, he also doesn't even NEED to focus on breaking the shiel... Rylan is a master swordsman he could use a style of many fast feint like attacks that keep hitting the shield everywhere with little force keeping stamina consumption low (or just stopping short of hitting actually depending on how much mana each impact costs Hayden) While also being prepared for if Hayden drops the shield to cast a lightning quick Magic Missile, by simply having his sword ready to go from "light strikes to force up a mana shield" towards "real cutting strike hurting enough to imediatly dispell Hayden's attack cast". I think something like that would be amazing to see for proffessors as well as it proves something they thought earlier, in a battle of mages without Multi Casting the moment one fighter can force the other on tying up their only means of both attack and defense in magic shield by being a mundane threat... It comes down to "can your mana exthaust my stamina to first hit you with my sword and then after my mana supply against what you may have left". I think Rylan wouldn't yet do this because he is very focused on "pure magic" I think kind of not realizing that using his "mundane swordsmanship" without mana in tandem with the Magic would be great already, it wouldn't reveal any earth shattering secrets, it wouldn't even defeat the purpose of "I want to learn magic" because he definitely needs to learn casting magic while Swordfighting anyway at some point (I wonder if that will be like duel casting almost? Focusing on 2 things at once or if Rylan can also cheat there use Roland's memories and experience to almost do the swordplay completely on autopilot while casting simulaneously after some practice lol) AND it would be a great skill to TEACH he would already have something to give to the kingdom and the academy... I mean it doesn't have to be swordplay honestly a dagger works probably even better you know? learn to fight with a dagger bring it to a mage fight and while the opponent is purely fighting with magic you suddenly surprise them with a dagger attack and it ends or you simply gain an entire avenue of attack the other doesn't have! Actually now I'm thinking about this... Rylan could probably punch his way through the matches lol... I suddenly would love an april fools of the tournament going like this: Rylan starts his fight by casting a single spell while dodging his opponents try to hit him he eventually reaches them and with one punch knocks them out cold xDDD Anyway I'll get back to finish reading. Lol... writing paragraph after paragraph on explaining how Rylan could easily win against anyone not using Dual casting and that he might consider just doing this here... Only for Hayden to just pull it out lol, its as if you literally read my mind xD. Now I will pick up the point of injuries as another commenter mentioned. A magical force projectile that hit the Should enough to quote "it ground against the Bone" I would really recommend changing that. Because THAT is definitely not something you use an arm with no matter the adrenaline. Basically its a paradox you write about Hayden getting "just a Gnash with the Missile piercing hin skin after being diverted" But... The attack hitting bone is literally only possible if it completely shredded the muscles and tendons around that spot. Thats how the anatomy works. I mean it makes sense these guys have supernatural toughness, they all invested in physical stats at least to some extent right? Nobody reaches beyond level 25 for sure in case for these third circle mages without putting some stats into the physical I assume? But beyond even that the described injuries sometimes just don't add up to the adjectives used to desribe them... If Rylan has injuries in Sum "worse than a Gnash coming from a projectile grinding against bone" they must be pretty horrifying. Hayden beyond bloodloss must feel PAIN beyond imagination and he starts DUAL CASTING after this xD I'm honestly not sure how or this is even is an issue to be fixed, perhaps stats help with pain suppression or mental stats especially help ignore physical sensations to a point. But thats something to be checking at least. If you think this is fine and how you want it then thats ok as well, I think most people wouldn't really be bothered by it when the fights are all this gripping because we wouldn't be focusing on details like that^^ Overall I loved this chapter! And look forward to the edits I will read those all at once when they're done I think!

Some Guy

TFTC

The Lost Pages

Great chapter. I definitely enjoyed it as is. One point of confusion for me, why did the first magic missile fail to penatrate when it hit Hayden in the chest? The second on injured his arm with a hole.


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