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SSR - Chapter 89: Finals (4)

🕑 Added 2025-02-21 01:00:47 +0000 UTC

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Dave_S

Thanks for the chapter! I hope Hayden becomes an ally.

Joanie

I also wonder what title he got. Is it battle mage or something weird because he is fighting while ignoring is injuries. Maybe 'Mind of steel' or something like 'Masochist mage' 🤭

Aaron Johnston

Take this in the spirit it is given. Write faster please.

AetherBoye

I disagree completely, a good fight should take a couple chapters. Once you approach the 6 chapter mark it can drag but this, this is a good length I feel.

EsZeus

You asked for feedback ^^ That's what I feel since the tournament arc started. Some fights were good, some were too long. This one feels more like stretched artificially

EsZeus

Too long. Sorry to say that, but the fights, especially this one, is waaaaay too long.

Steven

Enjoyed the chapter, biggest challenge I experience is that all your battles are like dragon ball Z. A bunch of chapters to conclude one battle. You may consider having some much larger chapters so that the battle isn’t split up between chapters.

James Faulkner

Tftc!

Gopard

Yeah I just loved this... Just pure gripping from start to finish for me there was simply no attention left to see "inconsistencies" or "small strange word choices" because the whole chapter was new exciting and engaging. And personally I think this how the greatest stories do it... No writer likely can account to every single little sentence they write always being 100% consistent with everything they wrote but as long as they are close and when every chapter makes you want to not stop reading at all those fall away and are easily ignored (in a good way). Absolute loved this one finally the sword came out! Now he has committed to no losing but dial casting is one hell of a powerspike for Hayden I wonder of Rylan can win without using at least one sword Art in conjunction with the Falling Snow Steps as he will need to pierce on Magic Shield for sure to end this!

Some Guy

TFTC

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter. The cliff hurts… I’m anxiously awaiting the finale of this fight.

Damian Btooks

Ngl I just want more.

Joanie

I have been refreshing the page each 30 minutes for a while and it's finally out. And finally the sword! Can't wait for the next chapter. Do you know if the release time is going to be sporadic for a while? I'm sure school and the changes that you are making with the feedbacks are taking time.


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