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SSR - Book 2 Chapter 7: The Trip (2)

🕑 Added 2025-03-07 21:36:03 +0000 UTC

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L.E. Miranda

Good point. Let me work on fixing that.

Gopard

Yeah something like that to make everything slow smoother BC in chapter 6 it still sounds like once the Academy proffessors catch up they will "use their faster mode of transport".

Matthew Avery

Maybe write in that these lizard carts are only something the very best in the city can use, and they needed Damien to pull some strings?

Matthew Avery

In regards to the joining the family part I am unsure what is being implied? He is Elizabeths son, so he is already in the family? So he can just tell the Ass'hats to f off, and go about his day? What in the world do they hope to achieve by being so dumb about the power play? Rylans old self was recognized as being a wastral, so society clearly recogizes moral right and wrong. So how would forced compliance, torture, or whatnot of a family member that is anything less than chained up in the basement work? Elizabeth can literally just go to the king and complain about her creepy brother/father, no?

Matthew Avery

So this feels strange to me, but why exactly are they sending these 5th circle mages with him? I get the dungeon part, but is it a quantifiable danger? Such as it having a mana vibration his father can interpret as dangerous- even to him? We got a tiny snippet of dungeon lore with the ratio of natural system dungeon vs artificial ones, speculations of a possible 'powerful monster made boss'. I'm just struggling to see what these protectors are for? Bandits? Random monster attacks? If Rylan was smart about it, couldn't he just tell Damien that his town is threatened by a dungeon, and to please just send these 5th circles that apparantly answers to him over there to stomp it? Why does it have to be Rylan that goes in person?

Nimps

Yeah I agree, they said he approached him to get there faster than 10 days but now it actually took longer because they had to wait to have a meeting with Damien before leaving

Aaron Johnston

Yay I win.

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter.

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter! I honestly find the whole development now a bit strange... Maybe don't make the reason to approach Damien that he "needs to get home faster"? Because if that was the case then this whole other thing would be strange to do that they just end up taking the better carriage without the Academy assistance. Maybe make it so Rylan needs to approach the academy because he and Aelfric can't just up and leave the city as new students? I mean I think that would make more sense otherwise it's strange that for example the older siblings not also come along to use the chance for a visit home... I think this is probably a minor thing though and may just be me being nitpicky.


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