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SSR - Book 2 Chapter 9: The Dreamer

🕑 Added 2025-03-11 02:41:48 +0000 UTC

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Traellium

I think some people have? In Roland's world mana was known about but severely under-developed. I assumed this was the case for Aura in this world.

Bettina

The class sounds great. See the world is a big change from no time to explore the capital - got to train. For the positive. I'll enjoy learning more about the surroundings. I regretted the lost opportunity for sightseeing and a great shopping spree in the capital. Also learning more about the animals will be interesting. I'm no fan of infodumps, but calling the wildlife lizard creatures and not learning the species name seems rather disinterested in the world.

Reader reading

TYFTC! Really liked the class. Something that I have been thinking about is regarding aura is that it doesn’t make sense really if he is the only one on the planet that has it. No one has ever worked so hard that they unlocked it before through history?it seems like all you have to do to unlock aura is train ridiculously hard. Sure it’s difficult but to have no one to have done it seems odd. I think it might make more sense for it to be extreamly rare and only higher level people are aware of it, but for him to be the only one in the story to know about it later on might make it feel a little weird. - just a thought. Keep going!

Dave_S

Thanks for the chapter! Nice class!

santiago uccella

Thanks for the chapters! Last time I commented I felt divided about continuing with th suscripción because the publishing timeschedule was becoming erratic. It's better now and I'm glad I kept going. I justo need MORE haha

Justin Mott

Is there a discord?

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter! I mean so far it all sounds great with that class... Lots of power interesting mechanics and nice descriptions that make sense with how Rylan developed. I think Amy real judgement will have to be kind of reserved once we go back to the academy wether he just completely dunks on every other student purely by his class power or still needs to use his manifold skills and so on to succeed. But looks great so far!

L.E. Miranda

Good point. I have an idea of where I want to go, but yes, I'll think about the specifics more. Thank you!

L.E. Miranda

Yeah, I don't want the first Class Evo to give Rylan a strong Active Skill. Dreams of Transcendence is strong enough. At the same time, the creation of Skills that merge both swordsmanship and magic is definitely coming! He just needs to train for a while

L.E. Miranda

Yeah, I definitely thought of doing that. Still a bit on the fence about it, despite this chapter. At the very least, I'll enhance his reaction to the confirmation of Aura's existence in this life. I feel like it's too bland as it is

L.E. Miranda

Moonlight will indeed return, but your way of doing it is interesting. I hadn't thought of something like that and it would definitely be a way of making Moonlight part of the story much earlier than I had planned. Thanks for the idea!

L.E. Miranda

Completely understand your perspective. The reason why I didn't go with something like that is the Scrying Crystals/similar tools. In times when Rylan has to reveal his class - for whatever story/plot point, including his new master - Trailblazer would raise more eyebrows than The Dreamer, in my opinion

L.E. Miranda

I saw your comment about the mind/spirit thing and it isn't a bad idea at all. Definitely common in cultivation stories AND focused on in one of the stories I used as inspiration for this one (Second Coming of Gluttony). I've just been thinking abt how to introduce it in this story. As for Moonlight, I won't spoil anything, but the sword's words in the Title are a hint that it's not just a weapon!

Bosparan

Heya, thanks for the chapter! Regarding the class: I think stat/skill-wise it is just fine. This is a power fantasy, so he gets the good stuff. The only issue I tend to have with huge rewards is when they don't feel earned, something that definitely does _NOT_ apply here. And it isn't so completely off-kilter as it might seem: This class grants a total of 43 points per level. The minimal power magic class upgrade offered 15. While this may seem crazy, split this between magic, physical (defensive) and physical (offensive) attributes: + Dreamer: 12 Magic, 12 Defense, 12 Offense, 7 Free + Wizard: 8 Magic, 2 Defense, 5 Free Even with the most boring spellcasting class, they can have more magic stats than Rylan, unless he also puts his free points in magic. And there must be far better magic classes than [Wizard]. Also, spells also offer defense via barrier spells, compensating somewhat for that part of the stats, especially once you master dual-casting. As we've seen in the tournament, those shield spells are not perfect, but still, a fairly viable substitute for Body. In other words, he still has a gap to overcome against his peers that focus solely on magic. He still has to put in effort. One of the big challenges I see in the longevity of Power Fantasies, is when explosive growth has them leave everything behind in the dust at an ever-increasing scale. This class appears to not do that too badly, especially when he keeps hiding half of his skillset ...

Moaz Khan

I made a comment in the last chapter about a 3rd mind/spirit path, and I thought it could be a nice element to introduce another power set. Instead of using Aura (generated from the body), or mana (generated from energy in the world), there could be a third element generated from dieties (like holy/demonic) which could also serve as another set of enemies (something I see in a lot of warlock series). I think it could be a nice tie in to re-introduce Moonlight as more than a weapon but an actual character/familiar type weapon

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter! I like the class (though it definitely leans OP, that can still be fun), but it feels to me like Dreamer as a concept is traditionally relatively passive. Since he's actively creating something new on this world, a more traditionally proactive name like Pathfinder or Trailblazer seems to fit better to me... though again, the actual benefits and skills are on point.

Alex Alexander

I like it he currently has mana and magic which seems like 2 parts of a path but seems to be missing aura for his swordsmanship maybe it would be appropriate to unlock aura and his main efforts are working them together idk however you do it I will prob enjoy it as I check for notifications everyday for this story

Senoj Ttehr

He needs to get his sword back..but as it might be too OP, perhaps have it temporarily weakened to his level due to the long interdimensional journey the sword had to undergo. It then regains its power as he levels up.

dani

I vote for class without active skills. It suits Rylan's goal better if he learns something himself than if he gets something from the system.

James Faulkner

Tftc!

Monadologist

He now has an explicit acknowledgement from the system that obtaining Aura is possible. I admit I expected you to keep that one closer to your chest until a big reveal later.

BH

Or if you don’t want to associate any active skills with the class maybe just have that be one of his next learning objectives. I’m imagining something like a flaming sword skill.

BH

Hmmm I like the class you outlined for this evolution. I feel like the learning speed increase will be a great touch to help speed him along his journey. The bit about aura is nice as well for confirmation and future class evolutions. If I were to suggest any changes it might just be to add an active skill to combine swordsman ship with spell casting.

Chriton

Its a good first class balancing and acknowledging his abilities without being too overpowered

Justin Mott

I like the class. Spellsword✓ Roland✓ Fat bonuses✓ Cool unique skill✓ The only feedback I would give is—if you haven't already—have a clear progression of the concepts behind the class. Because this is clearly a spellsword class, but it isn't called that because there is a fundamentally more important concept of chasing dreams. So, if you move away from that the class having an underlying concept it will be weird—like Dreamer -> Expert Spellsword. Furthermore, at some point you are no longer a dreamer when you've achieved your goal so it'll have to change at some point. So, assuming the following classes are related then there should probably be a clear evolution to the conceptual foundation of dreams. Otherwise there might be some weird bodging to get it all to work and this would be the best place to change it slightly if you can't figure one out

Nathan moi

I personnaly think the class is a good fit. I was expecting him to get a class after the dungeon (where i also expected him to awaken Aura while trying to save his father or with a similar developement). What the class does well is aknowledging that he is at the beginning of his path and that the fact it helps awaken aura is great. Maybe the class description could use some more words to point out how hard his path is going to be ? Idk, maybe something like Dreamer of the Pinacle, or a similar adjective. I think it's great overall, the only thing i was fearing was that he would be getting a lesser class as he still doesn't have aura. Tyftc

Dotakiin

I liked the class; it's a lot better than a generic magic swordsman that I was expecting.

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter. I think the class and its accoutrements are a good solution to the dilemma of powerful past vs less impressive current self. Btw 2 typos: He focused his perception no the last line => He focused his perception on the last line And: The System was acknowledging that he path he was pursuing => The System was acknowledging that the path he was pursuing

TooOldForThisShit

Well I guess in one sense, as he progresses and evolves his class further, those "dreams" can be made "reality"


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