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SSR - Book 2 Chapter 15: Veria Woodlands (6)

🕑 Added 2025-03-20 00:58:08 +0000 UTC

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Some Guy

TFTC

PhantomGlitch

Thanks for the chapter , is the dungeon locked from the outside as well?

Lore Keeper Haos

Feels better, yeah.

L.E. Miranda

Great point. I've made some changes to the chapter and would really appreciate it if you could tell me what you think. Thank you!

Lore Keeper Haos

Definitely think Rylan should be making his thoughts process clearer to Gerard rather than focusing solely on efficiency of training. Think he's letting Roland's experiences overtake his reason and isn't realizing that he's putting a lot of stress on his father by doing things this way, even if he's strong. If that's intentional and setting up for a future conflict with his parents/family after the dungeon, it's fine but if not he definitely needs to get a fair bit more pushback soon since, strong or not, his actions are worrisome and stressful. Feels like one of those things where he's too comfortable with his line of thought and is accidentally doing what he swore not to do: ignoring his family and not realizing the rift he may be creating in the name of becoming strong enough to protect them.

L.E. Miranda

I completely understand you guys' opinions and they're valid, but take note that this is still a litrpg story. Combat and training are part of the genre. I'll try to be less long-winded though

Joanie

Same if no comment, that mean it's good :) One thing, with all is level up shouldn't he be close to third circle? Also maybe something to give us an idea of how much it impacted him instead of just being able to kill more easily. Like how much faster he can run towards the dungeon or how much the damage is greater on enemies. Thanks for the chapter 🙂

Aaron Johnston

Rylan should be talking about his thought process outloud so Gerard knows what hos son is doing and stop nagging.

EsZeus

Silence also means resignation for many people.

EsZeus

100% same. For me it's too much fighting over multiple chapters. Instead of doing thus in one chapter, then having shown what the characters are doing and skipping it, we see it slowly and in detail over multiple chapters. It's boring and more like filler chapters. That's my major and main problem with the story currently.

Dotakiin

I generally skim the all combat chapters, since I am more interested in the character developments.

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter. That was definitely an “oh, shit” moment.

BH

Great chapter! I’m glad you picked up the pace the last couple chapters had good fights but felt a little slow paced. Also a nice touch with the dungeon dynamic preventing leaving. It’ll be a great excuse to push them further. I also appreciate that at least someone is asking why the professors can’t accompany them. All in all solid chapter can’t wait for the dungeon arc!

Mitchell Calhoun

Yeah figured something like this would happen. He’s being way too cocky to the point of idiocy. This is a dungeon putting his whole town at risk and he’s treating it as a training facility. I honestly hope he gets his ass kicked and needs to be saved because he needs to realize he isn’t invincible. Just because Roland survived for so long doesn’t mean he wont get unlucky. By this point they should have let the others join and finished this shit.

Moaz Khan

I’m liking the pace and direction of the story. Just don’t drag out the dungeon arc and aura activation too long. Don’t want to start the DBZ trend where whole chapters are filler or fluffy descriptions without actual character growth, power progression, or plot development

TooOldForThisShit

Honestly, I tend to only leave replies if either an author requests specific feedback on something, or if I've got a gripe/criticism. For my part, silence means I'm reading without major complaint

Sye

I second this

Damian Btooks

True. Rn is bitg lul moment in the story. Not anything too interesting happening

thaughton2

I just haven't really had much to say. No complaints. It feels like it's been building up to something, so now it's just a question of how it peaks the resolves. Any issues should be clear then.


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