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SSR - Book 2 Chapter 16: Basilisk Wilds (1)

🕑 Added 2025-03-22 00:38:43 +0000 UTC

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Some Guy

TFTC

Bettina

Most of your readers are boys no doubt, but you do get the occasional girl in the audience. 😉

thaughton2

It's a pretty wholesome conversation to have in a life threatening situation, I like it. Though personally, I think his intent to protect Gerard gets mentioned one too many times. I feel like it would be worth removing 'He couldn’t let Gerard get hurt.' after 'There was no room for mistakes'. It should be clear already. I think how the ending repeating his intent is great though. Feels like it's setting up for something, like he's overestimating himself or underestimating his father.

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter. I’m excited for the possibility of him re-awakening aura, and combining it with mana. Will we get a new resource such as “Aether” or “Thauma” or something else entirely…

James Faulkner

Tftc! I’m excited for Rylan to get aura and hopefully see the physical elemental effects of his sword styles!


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