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Unused storyboard of ch 69 and 70
🕑 Added 2025-01-15 13:43:59 +0000 UTCWarning: Very messy. Cut somewhere in middle because my brain stopped working. May have a spoiler of future main chapter plot. Bald character (just guess who is who by their dialogues)
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1. very first 70/cont of ch 69 (i think I stopped because it's too depressing/i have to deal with drawing drama again and then frustrated)
-ended here.
2. Alt 1 of ch 70, probs similar to the fixed chapter, taken some panel from last part above^^^
---even I forget there's NSFW in this part hahahahah
I think I stopped because to reach this part I already spend like 15ish panels with no plot advancing o)---(
But i really like the part where yolka fucking andra every night because of jealousy and andra enjoying it and subtle-ly using ravi to make yolka pound him every night //cough
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3. alt 2 of ch 70, still similar panels
--this is all, IDK why I stopped but anyway I liked that panel where andra yanked ravi's hair violently 😂😂 after this part is supposed to be the part where yolka interrogate ravi about the 'proposal' he mentioned, but then I think if I did write about it (and not just mention it in passing like in actual chapter 70) it will take another chapter until we got to andra family home 🥲🥲 so this alt is cancelled..
4. Alt 3 of ch 70, where I changed the opening scene of ravi+yolka to ->>andra's family POV
this is all for the last alt, which some panels is included to the finished_fix_fix_ch70 😂But andra's family is way meaner. I decided to change it so that poor andra didn't get attacked by his own family but instead attacking yolka.
That is all, the alt 4 is the one that become the real chapter in the end:
Usually when I used the big storyboard like this instead of the normal one-strip page (800x30000px one) I'm already stressed😂
This is all I'm showing to show you why ch70 took so long. I keep making alternatives and too much thinking. I need to break this habit .____.
But when I got a writer's block, or story block, I just keep making these alt and hope to make a breakthrough(from the block) instead of thinking it thoroughly and stick with just one scenario. It become a weakness in the end...🥲🥲 or maybe my storytelling just deteriorates.
But oh well, the chap is done.
Hope you enjoyed it! Everyone is bald hahahahaha
Comments
SUMAJA
👀👀👀👀it's....
Greece Hernández
wdym Yolka's EPD is not gone?? 😭😭
SUMAJA
I also like that part a lot😂😂😂 but he's so savaaage. I'll tell you in later part why he's like that, andra's past is a little fun. And he's little scheming beta who like to be possessed and turned on by yolka's domination, he's very happy every time yolka is jealous. Freaky ass potato indeed! Yeah I changed that family part because it'll be too easy on yolka. He had to suffer more so the family is testing him now instead of firing fire to andra (which I made because I want to show andra is...not treated too goodly in his own house)
SUMAJA
Thank you😭😭 but I can't help but feel frustrated until the storyboard is fixed hahahaha even though when I look back at these unused storyboards, I feel if I just focus on continuing any of them it will still turns out fine. But still the fixed version is the best... I also can't wait to draw more snu snu//cough
SUMAJA
I haven't! It sounds like a cute idea though, imma write it down😂😂
SUMAJA
Snake shed its skin😂 but yeah, this is the process until it become the fixed chapter! No, the tension in the last chapter is not that serious😂I plan to make yolka's pheromones still a problem but it won't be now. But yeah, his recovery takes time! I'm gonna draw the proposal thing from cousin POV when I finished his story~~ and yep andra now get a very *nice* future husband😂
rae of sunshine
i love the alt scenes! andra pulling ravi's hair 😂 he really has no fear of alphas lol. and being happy because yolka gets jealous and possessive afterwards 😭 they really match each others' freak!! the family being charmed by yolka and immediately wailing on andra is too real, like why do you have to expose me in front of someone you just met????? thanks for sharing!
CASTER
Don't stress too much! You have a process that's resulted in a wonderful story that has good pacing and in my opinion excellent character development. The snusnu is also excellent 👌
Sheila
Wait wait wait, Andra can’t ride a bicycle? Have you thought of an extra where Yolka tries to teach him?
Condruz Irina
WOW indeed! So many versions. I feel like I just watched a snake sheed his skin to get the smoot and pretty result. But I get the feeling from this that the tension at the end of the chapter was because of pheromones and not snu snu. If it' s really because of that, then I feel sad for Yolka and I hope he'll get better with his cute Beta on his side. Recovery does take time, and it is paifull and frustrating at time... but having the ones you care about with you, and finding some enjoyment in little things in life, can help you to continue on to a new day. Man , I'm getting to serious for something that I'm just imagining might happen. Anyway, the small banter between our Alpha and the Cousin was great, hope we get a few more interactions between them, even just some one liners. Ooooooo, maybe we will find out how the proposal happened. Cute baby Andra trying to get a husband, and he got now one hell of a nice *future* husband.
sockh00die
Oh! I'll check her out thank you! I really appreciate it💖
SUMAJA
her IG is didiwalker00, and she made ongoing webtoon called Kosan 95! :D she worked very very fast...
sockh00die
Omg thank you so much! Jpeg is just fine! Could I get the webtoon artist name or user so I could properly credit in the future? :)
SUMAJA
Yes it should be fine before, but because I work so slow now I have to make sure there's a plot advance in every chap I made now😭😭 sobssss😭 that's why I discarded these above, even though some scene is pretty cute! Don't worry, andra enjoyed it too😂
SUMAJA
Yes! I use this template which I get from a webtoon artist in her workshop. Is JPEG fine? Check it: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1kIy8fhF8K8Fnd6E8pQ8IYclWoeuAspP0/view?usp=sharing
SUMAJA
So much stuff ;w;///
beboybenkins
I love it! Even if there isn't any plot advancement (as you said), I still love it! I would read about every little tiny bit of their lives if I could. Thank you for sharing this! It is so cool to get to see the process behind the finished chapters. Also, poor Andra hahaha he can't ever catch a break!
sockh00die
This is super cool to see. And that giant storyboard at the end, do you have a blank one you could share?? I could totally use something like that ;0;
Valeria Miceli
WOW!
