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Chapter 1

🕑 Added 2025-02-20 10:39:08 +0000 UTC

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Aedin.....

why the game dos not working

Isaac

I'm still having trouble trying to access that game, not sure.What to do

Luchadork

Without giving away plot, chapter 2 will have sex scene, face to ass scene, and butt crush scene. I want to add mini game mechanic to at least one of these

MatadorTesla

Do you mind describing what we're expected to see in Chapter 2?

Luchadork

Thank you so much for taking the time to write a review! I’m really happy to read that the teasing pace of this chapter worked well for you. It’s basically foreplay for the absurd (very absurd) things that are to come starting in Chapter 2. These characters have lived in my head for awhile now so I really want to establish them well before throwing them into all sorts of crazy scenarios. This is an adult game so each coming chapter will one way or another try to satisfy our shared fantasies 🤓

Perry Yad

I've been waiting for this for a minute now so excuse my long comment since it's gonna serve as a review. I think this was perfect and I'm surprised that it's your first VN, since it turned out so well. The pixel art is super cute, I'm not sure if you did it yourself or if it's from an asset pack, but I thought the sets themselves were super cute and well done! Loved your color choices for the entire mansion. I thought the brighter hues of Lucas' rooms versus the deeper/neutral hues of the actual mansion was a great contrast! The kitchen was also brighter too since it seems like Lucas likes food which could be why it also has a color palette similar to his room, not sure if that was intentional. Your art was amazing as usual. I seriously love that you aren't afraid to go all out when it comes to proportions. Loved the thick nipples, huge asses, and hairy chests. Excited to see when there's some sex CGs and all the clothes come off. The plot is pretty simple, but effective, as a mechanism to get us to the sex. At the beginning, when Lucas has to gather all the ingredients and says: "This better be worth it", was so funny to me. It was a pretty meta way to say just wait you'll get to spicy bits in a sec, but the VN technology has to be used as well. I think your strongest point is your banter between characters, I found it really charming and witty. I think you could even throw some prose in there to set the scene, but that's just my suggestion. Speaking of setting the scene, the bouncing on the bed scene was my favorite part, obviously. I thought you did a great job at utilizing the tension from gathering all the items, as well as the tension between Deiman and Lucas, to make a super hot scene. I also loved that you blue balled the audience too, and I'm not even joking. I think that was a great way to build up to the spicier scenes that will come in to play later. The tension between the two exploding, only for it to get cut a bit short, was really funny and also mad me want more. I'm interested to see where the B plot goes with all the stuff that happens near the end. The reveal at the end with a big, glorious, gigantic ass in my face was a great way to end Chapter 1. Really excited for the next parts.

Umbra Lux

This was amazing! the art and animations were perfect. I got stuck trying to find the bar room until I saw the door there, which was dumb of me.

Luchadork

Hello! Send me a DM and I can walk you through the redemption process :3

Shaedo

That was so good. The writing is funny and witty; the timing is fantastic; the switch between the pixel models to the beautifully rendered and animated pngs; the hot as hell men. You've outdone yourself