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Title test

🕑 Added 2024-12-13 16:22:36 +0000 UTC

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Chin Eva

I actually liked the earlier box better

Felix Flames

Much more readable. I think I also prefer not having titles at all, though.

Joshua Holt

Removing the border and background makes more work (text color changes for contrast) but helps immensely with the look. Great change.

Sarah

I love it, more context.

Mario Sixtus

Team "No Text at all, please, because part of the fun is to figure out who is who!" here!

Sara A Fox

I agree with this. There's something to be said for figuring things out from the context clues, your own knowledge, and/or your ability to do research.

Rachel R

Dissenting voice here -- I like trying to figure out exactly who everyone is over the course of a few viewings -- like the delight when I first realized that Sisyphus was Sisyphus. Laika was Laika.

Pyrs

I think if the text was in a floating box that had a bit of motion, or faded in and out with a wiggle as the character spoke, might fit the style better. but i like the idea.

Eden Kawka

I prefer the location on screen for sure. That way I can check there if I don’t recognize a character but focus on the interviews without getting distracted if I’m up to speed.

Charles Eubanks

I was ok with the groovy font. But the more conventional font seems well more conventional for ironic subtitles. you want the attention on the content not the font so this is an improvement.

Scott Morizot

I like the fact that they are less distracting. I thought it worked really well.

the forest Jar

Just the name thing in the top right.

the forest Jar

Yeah that would be my ideal, but I'm trying to keep it away from where the captions will go.

TeufelSzeuG

I don't get what changed...

Neal Seidman

I would think something in the lower third of the screen, like traditional news coverage.

Juan Chanco

I feel like the original ones fit the overall style of the cartoon better.

T34mki11

Love it.

Rodrigo Espinosa Huerta

I like them. May I suggest that you have different titles for the same character (perhaps, 5 for each one) that you could randomly or something similar?

Adara

Actually yeah! Much better except for the white tiny words, it gets lost in the background so its a bit hard to read. But I like the fonts and transition effect. More aesthetic and less on ur face.


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