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Delirium sample picture II
🕑 Added 2015-03-16 19:01:52 +0000 UTC I redraw the Eloise main character for the game, I think this is more like the first Eloise (on stroke of madness comic first pages.) The background have different color too, and I add rain, because in the game we have a rain animation on the street scenes :P Tell me please if you prefer this design or the last one, if you want other changes, you can leave the idea in the comments, or send me an email, whatever you preffer. Thank you very much for your support!!
Comments
Joseph
To smaller and unfreckled...
Marcus Eclipse
Gotta say, the other one looks better in my opinion. The boobs look way to covered up/ small in this picture. Also, the hat is a nice touch.
Redhaired Flames
Like alfonx said, an umbrella would be perfect, and right now I think this is much better than the design from the first picture. However, I love Eloise in that beret!
Nikraria
Hat back, and the freckles of course! I like this dress more than other, but I guess i can make the two kind of dress without problem. Next time I'll make a fional poll for the design of the eloise and then we can move on to another thing ^^ Thank you very much for the feedback :)
Nikraria
Is a nice idea, I'll keep on my mind :P thank you!
Nikraria
ok, I'll try to make the sky in that way!
Nikraria
xD I like this one, but I think a little more (like Aglass said) can be cool too :)
Nikraria
I'm pretty sure we can find a design nice for all of us ;)
alfonx
In the rain scenes maybe she could have an umbrella? Or else she'd get wet (not that there's anything wrong with that :P
Spooky
I like the composition of this one better. Maybe the sky could be a shade darker green (like in the first picture). Eloise's boobs definitely look better now.
Venron
I really like this one better that the first one. In the first picture she looks too cartoonish, and I think the boobs are sexier in this one (and to me, the first picture just looks painful)
Steamventus
I love the new detail in this one and I'm a little sad that the boobs are smaller. I liked them big.
Nikraria
I know what you mean ;P If everybody want more boobs I'll try make the thing as you said! Thanks !
Nikraria
oook then the hat on aand a little more boobs. We wait for some opinion more before new changes :D thank you for comment Dorago!
AGlassOfMilk
I think it's fine like this :) I like it. If you want to make them little bigger because others request it, I would add a little on top of them, making them hang longer (same height as now, just more line from the top of the tits :o But as I said I think it is fine as it is now :) , , , , ( ° )( ° ) -- ( ° )( ° )
Dorago
Yeah, that redesign is great, I'm looking forward to see more :)
