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[Comic] Page 12
🕑 Added 2019-02-12 06:11:43 +0000 UTCTime for a much needed pose change. I've also changed Dolly's bedroom to a less drab color scheme; in the final version, previous pages will be edited to reflect this.
Drove myself slightly insane trying to get that last panel to look right. TBH it still looks really weird to me, but at this point I can't tell if I've just been staring at it for too long or what. Time to press on regardless.
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Comments
Varian Lee
Dolly's absolutely right. It is getting hot in here!
Jon Whitehead
The last panel is quite good, but I think I can see what was driving you nuts. I can't tell if it's the angle or the proportions , but Luna's abdomen is a lot shorter than it should be in the last panel. When you compare her abdomen in the first and last panel they look very different.
vasily26
Loving the colors here! Dig the various shades of pink and blue, both for the room and also for Dolly's underwear. Excited to see some spanking!
Spanking time :D
Flargo
Absolutely GORGEOUS! Its been echoed a couple of times but I gotta say it again - Luna and Dolly's expressions in this comic have been seriously incredible. Phenomenal in every sense of the word!
jam-orbital
Both, of course 👀
lucipher1
What comes next? Wand vibrator or spanking? XD
